i like how you're going about it letting it build up and all nice method which just makes the story even better can't wait for the next one, one thing i'm really looking forward to is when Hannah tells Luke who she is and the reaction
I'm still having problems with the grammer. And the fact that Luke just hired her and he's all over her, with his kids there. But that's just me. Keep up the good work.
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Anonymous01/21/08
You rock!
I love your story and everything about it, except that I can't get enough! Please write more and quick!
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Anonymous01/30/08
hurry
I check the web site every morning before leaving for work (about 5am)and now my husband laughs "Who is going to teach your first period class if you're late?". Thank you for a very enjoyable story. Sex is fun but a good story keeps my attention much longer.
English
great story
i like how you're going about it letting it build up and all nice method which just makes the story even better can't wait for the next one, one thing i'm really looking forward to is when Hannah tells Luke who she is and the reaction
Can it get any bette???
Awesome story it just keeps getting better and better cant wait for MORE!!!
divorced from reality
"romantic", yeah, as some white-noise fantasy, but it is totally devoid of any basis in reality
Really Like It!
You're doing a great job with this story and I can't wait to read the rest!!!
Really Good
I'm still having problems with the grammer. And the fact that Luke just hired her and he's all over her, with his kids there. But that's just me. Keep up the good work.
You rock!
I love your story and everything about it, except that I can't get enough! Please write more and quick!
hurry
I check the web site every morning before leaving for work (about 5am)and now my husband laughs "Who is going to teach your first period class if you're late?". Thank you for a very enjoyable story. Sex is fun but a good story keeps my attention much longer.
luv it
I love it cant wait for more hopefully its really soon
Great Story
Keep it up! This is a great story and I can't wait to read more.
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