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Such a tease!
A lot of authors either spend too much time building up to the action, causing the reader to lose interest, or else they don't have any build-up at all and it's anti-climactic. But I think you had just the right amount of teasing here--very hot! My only suggestion would be to include more dialogue, but that's just my personal preference, and the story is great as-is.
Wonderful
Best anal I have found here, and by such a gorgeous woman. Please keep them coming.
hot hot HOT!
Excellent story! Just the right amount of leadin, then fantastic description of a REALLY hot scene!
Keep it going - can't wait for the next chapter!
Good Job
I enjoyed it, quite the tease.....
At last
Finally, a passionate and elegant anal story.Beautiful!
Lal
FUCK!
THAT Nookie was over the top. Thank you for sharing that with me. I need a cold one now. (seriously ... I just shivered)
There has to be a part 2 to this one.
I am waiting for it.
Scott38
In love with your mind
I love your style. Erotic yet dirty at the same time. So arousing
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