All Comments on 'Ass Man'

A lot of authors either spend too much time building up to the action, causing the reader to lose interest, or else they don't have any build-up at all and it's anti-climactic. But I think you had just the right amount of teasing here--very hot! My only suggestion would be to include more dialogue, but that's just my personal preference, and the story is great as-is.

Best anal I have found here, and by such a gorgeous woman. Please keep them coming.

Excellent story! Just the right amount of leadin, then fantastic description of a REALLY hot scene!

Keep it going - can't wait for the next chapter!

I enjoyed it, quite the tease.....

Finally, a passionate and elegant anal story.Beautiful!

Lal

THAT Nookie was over the top. Thank you for sharing that with me. I need a cold one now. (seriously ... I just shivered)

There has to be a part 2 to this one.

I am waiting for it.

Scott38

I love your style. Erotic yet dirty at the same time. So arousing