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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/08/08

No bananas

Twenty years old and not called up yet? And, there weren't bananas to be had for any price! The secret to good stories is research. research, research..................

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by tartan902/09/08

How about at little praise?

I liked your story,it flowed very well and kept interest. I'm sure as you write more stories your attention to detail will increase, a very good effort.

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by Anonymous08/19/12

Factual Issues

WWII death notifications were always delivered via telegram with one exception. The only time I know of where a military man delivered a WWII death notice was General Geroge Marshall telling his wife her son had been KIA.

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