All Comments on 'Dark Angel: What if? Hello, Goodbye'

I'm not that big a fan of trying to fit sex into the series it was still a good story, just not as good as your previous ones.

I still maintain that this is a great concept, and while I love that you're updating on chyoo I'd really like to see another stand alone Dark Angel story (maybe Max/Rafer-'Meow').

great stuff, but Max and ALec arent bro and sis, they're not related. Only Max thinks of her fellow transgenics as 'family'

Caught your other 'What if' stories on adult fanfiction.net. 1 question: Why havent you posted it here on Lit. too?