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by Anonymous

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by CookieCutter01/23/08

sweet!

calls for a sequel

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by Anonymous01/23/08

Nice


No, it doesn't really need to be continued. (Unless you're already at work on it...?)

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by cheesy80s01/23/08

Nice descriptions

I enjoyed their tryst. I was descriptive to allow the reader to share in their pleasure.

Quite good.

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by Anonymous01/24/08

Very Hot..........

Great story....please write more....

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by Anonymous01/26/08

not bad

Good images. Some verb tense disagreement, something an editor could help you with. Keep writing!

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by hammer1701/26/08

Very Hot

now we need more of Amy and Lisa.....

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