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Thank you
DG Hear
DG, you sure can write a romance story! This was very good and lifted me from the doldrums of Monday.Thank you for your heartening story and fine entertainment.PT
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Anonymous01/21/08
great
I really enjoyed your story.I have always read each new item posted.
KEEP IT UP!!!
you're able to make me giggle a bit, that's what counts.
I know you, the author spent many hours thinking and cranking out the story. But I also invested some of my "quality" time reading it, too. And, indeed, that's what you want people to do with your stories: spend some time and read them. So... no matter how stupid, good, romantic, realistic or unrealistic a story is, if I am able to stick with it all the way through and find some funny lines, then it is "worth" my time.... and yours...
+++++++++++++++++++
If you're ever in our neighborhood and you see a slightly overweight couple walking and pushing a stroller with a beautiful baby boy in it, it's probably us. If there is a sweet little girl riding her bike along side of us, holding onto a leash with a little brown dog, then it is surely us.
In closing I would like to say that I knew I wasn't God's gift to women. Mary knew she wasn't God's gift to men. We both knew we were God's gift to each other.
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Anonymous01/21/08
Beautiful
I loved it!
It's really great to read a story when the man and the woman don't have perfect bodies. These characters seemed very real. Thank you for sharing this one!
Another lovely story from you DG. Your stories never fail to make me smile, laugh and occasionally cry. Thank you for the inspiring read. Good luck with the contest.
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Anonymous01/22/08
Reality in a Home Spun Story
It felt good so you did better than good Author.
Thanks for your imaginative talent and the ability to express it in a down to earth way.
With Very High Regard
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Anonymous01/22/08
100%
You deserve it. No doubt about it. It touches a nerve. G.Belgium
DG, thanks for the email! I checked again this morning and found that I can now download the story in its entirety. Yes, a truly excellent story with great character development and an interesting, heartwarming plot. You certainly caught life as it really is in this beautiful, romantic tale and made this old man feel so warm and happy. Good luck with the competition! Pete.
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Anonymous01/22/08
Wonderful Story
Congatulations! As "Peatbog" said, your story is truly heartwarming and such a pleasure to read. Thanks for writing it.
60 year old George
and yet realistic. A romance between two real people. Bravo!
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Anonymous01/25/08
A sorta fairytale...
Ya, that's what I felt reading your happily ended story. I love that the characters are all realistic and true to life--imperfected and yet perfect in their own way.
It's just so hard to find someone who's willing to look past your flaws and love you for who you are. Great story, I loved it.
I like a sweet romance once in a while, because I think most of us if we were honest would agree we would like to be with our soul mate. This is one of those gems in the rough. Well done DG Hear.
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Anonymous12/12/10
I'm reading through your stories A-Z....
The last one sucked out loud, this more than made up for it.
I liked your story. I sounds like they are happy and in love. Thanks Steve
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Anonymous04/03/14
Wonderful story.
I am not overweight, actually in good shape. However my fiance is what most people would consider fat. I love her so much that the way I judge a woman's looks anymore is "the more she looks like Tracy, the hotter she is". Beauty is definitely in the eye of the beholder, and I love to behold my honey.
English
Enjoyable.
A bit saccharine, but well written & pleasant.
Problem with story
I received three feedbacks saying they were unable to vote and that the story ended at the birthday party. I just checked and the story is three Lit pages long. If you did not read the whole story, please try again. For voting, you now click on the number of stars requested.
Thank you
DG Hear
A sweet Romance
I enjoyed the full three pages!
A little different,
but another winner from one of my very favorite authors.
Enjoyable
Thanks for another good read. PAPATOAD
A very good romance from a very good Author
DG, you sure can write a romance story! This was very good and lifted me from the doldrums of Monday.Thank you for your heartening story and fine entertainment.PT
great
I really enjoyed your story.I have always read each new item posted.
KEEP IT UP!!!
Now matter how silly it is, sometimes,,, If
you're able to make me giggle a bit, that's what counts.
I know you, the author spent many hours thinking and cranking out the story. But I also invested some of my "quality" time reading it, too. And, indeed, that's what you want people to do with your stories: spend some time and read them. So... no matter how stupid, good, romantic, realistic or unrealistic a story is, if I am able to stick with it all the way through and find some funny lines, then it is "worth" my time.... and yours...
+++++++++++++++++++
If you're ever in our neighborhood and you see a slightly overweight couple walking and pushing a stroller with a beautiful baby boy in it, it's probably us. If there is a sweet little girl riding her bike along side of us, holding onto a leash with a little brown dog, then it is surely us.
In closing I would like to say that I knew I wasn't God's gift to women. Mary knew she wasn't God's gift to men. We both knew we were God's gift to each other.
Beautiful
I loved it!
It's really great to read a story when the man and the woman don't have perfect bodies. These characters seemed very real. Thank you for sharing this one!
Awesome
I love that you write about ordinary people.
Touching as always.
Another lovely story from you DG. Your stories never fail to make me smile, laugh and occasionally cry. Thank you for the inspiring read. Good luck with the contest.
Reality in a Home Spun Story
It felt good so you did better than good Author.
Thanks for your imaginative talent and the ability to express it in a down to earth way.
With Very High Regard
100%
You deserve it. No doubt about it. It touches a nerve. G.Belgium
Heartwarming!!!
DG, thanks for the email! I checked again this morning and found that I can now download the story in its entirety. Yes, a truly excellent story with great character development and an interesting, heartwarming plot. You certainly caught life as it really is in this beautiful, romantic tale and made this old man feel so warm and happy. Good luck with the competition! Pete.
Wonderful Story
Congatulations! As "Peatbog" said, your story is truly heartwarming and such a pleasure to read. Thanks for writing it.
60 year old George
A li'l bit predictable
But who gives a damn!! A very nice story, dude. And NO unnecessary characters!
Loved it
A beautiful and touching story. I've enjoyed your work in the past, and enjoyed this story very much. Thank you from a greatful reader.
Incredibly Sweet...
and yet realistic. A romance between two real people. Bravo!
A sorta fairytale...
Ya, that's what I felt reading your happily ended story. I love that the characters are all realistic and true to life--imperfected and yet perfect in their own way.
It's just so hard to find someone who's willing to look past your flaws and love you for who you are. Great story, I loved it.
Another winner!
Another well written and sweet romance from a master! Only DG would try to make an IRS agent loveable.
Very Very Nice Story,
I like a sweet romance once in a while, because I think most of us if we were honest would agree we would like to be with our soul mate. This is one of those gems in the rough. Well done DG Hear.
I'm reading through your stories A-Z....
The last one sucked out loud, this more than made up for it.
Thanks.
Hear, hear!!
I've wanted to say "Hear, hear" every since I started reading DG Hear stories.
Puppy Size
Without fail that makes me cry.
I liked your story.
I liked your story. I sounds like they are happy and in love. Thanks Steve
Wonderful story.
I am not overweight, actually in good shape. However my fiance is what most people would consider fat. I love her so much that the way I judge a woman's looks anymore is "the more she looks like Tracy, the hotter she is". Beauty is definitely in the eye of the beholder, and I love to behold my honey.
Puppy Size rockes
The story was a pure winner -
They will hopefully live a long and happy life in fantasy land LOL
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