All Comments on 'The Ballad of Trey London'

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raunchyrareraunchyrareabout 16 years ago
You're back with a bang!

Very good for a short story! Different from your usual style, but very good indeed!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Erotic!

What an erotic thrill reading this story!

tangel08tangel08about 16 years ago
Awesome, Just Awesome

The ending was so surprising it was plainly awesome, good job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Hooooo---------Hummmmmmmm

Boooooooringgggggggg

pope32767pope32767about 16 years ago
This may be a bit radical, but ...

... although I liked this story very much, I think it might have been even better with two men rather than a man and a woman. Surprisingly little would have to change, and it would point up the contrast between the narrator and Trey's groupies very, very nicely.

A_DDA_DDabout 16 years ago
Amazing

The story was super sweet I loved it. The only bad thing is the people who dont like the story always have to voice there opinions, I prefer when opinions are given when there is something the author can change and still be true heart of the story.

puffin09puffin09about 16 years ago
i love it

absolutely wonderful and sweet

SparkedSparkedabout 16 years ago
replying to another comment

Actually, i thought it was two guys at first, but i dont think it would have been better that way. I love the twist and it made it all seem more interesting and well done. Great job, and so sweet!

SparkedSparkedabout 16 years ago
replying to another comment

Actually, i thought it was two guys at first, but i dont think it would have been better that way. I love the twist and it made it all seem more interesting and well done. Great job, and so sweet!

sblazer227sblazer227about 16 years ago
very sweet

sometimes raunchiness isnt always needed to have a great erotic story and you showed it. lovely

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Awwww

What a great story. The sex was hot, the moments tender, and the ending was totally a surprise. Fantastic. Let the haters hate and you do your thing...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
wonderful!

The story was delightful.

I appreciated the rendering of the club scene, the snarky heroine, the hot singer and the hotter sex scene. I'm a musician who loves interracial stories (and dating), so this was a fitting setting for me.

I loved it and I look forward to reading your other stories! Please write more and let your fans more than compensate for grumpy haters.

SecretFantasy69SecretFantasy69about 16 years ago
Brilliant!!!

Your stories have always been a treat for me and this one absolutely delivered. I thought it was well-written and well-thought out. Your characters are always believable and I can't wait to read more by you.

wildwildbestwildwildbestabout 16 years ago
good story

your sense of humor coupled with the lovemaking made for a solid story...your line about the stds -- "I suppose she was pretty, if one considers walking STDs attractive." -- had me on the floor...now I'm going to have to click on you and see what else you've written. Jayha Leigh

JazzMatthewsJazzMatthewsabout 16 years ago
Mmm, mmm, mmm

Humor and sexiness is always a plus for me. He was blazing hot, and what really got me was his...*ahem*...ways of persuasion. His words damn near turned me to putty. And he plays the guitar too? Lord, you've gotta love a man who's a sexy guitar player with a divine voice and Celtic knots to boot. Loved it. Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Congratulations

A well deserved E. Loved the story, the ending made me cry (in a good way). Maybe i'm turning mushy. lol. Anyways loved it. It was perfect.

mrskelleymrskelleyabout 16 years ago
Great Story!

Loved the twist at the end. I have read all of your stories and anxiously await for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
great!

short and sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
truly beautiful

a well written story..i loved it and i loved the ending beautiful made me wanna cry( but i'm the romantic mushy type)...oh...its sooo sweet

KatLadyKatLadyabout 16 years ago
I'm jealous . . .

I want me a Trey too! LOL! Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
That was so Cute

Oh my goodness,that was adorable. Congratulations and what a way to celebrate your anniversary. You go girl. A+ for originality. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Done done it again...

Gettin' published soon? Would love to read longer versions of more of your stories...LW

August_BouvierAugust_Bouvieralmost 16 years ago
Sweet and spicy

Liked the twist and I loved that you gave <i>Strange and Beautiful</i> its kudos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great story

I have read everything you have published on this site. I have thoroughly enjoyed all of them. Will you be published anytime in the near future? When will we hear more about Tegan and Derek?

WCD

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wishful Thinking

Adored it more than anything. It's just so good. My question is where did you find this magical man and HOW can I get one? You are a luck one girl.

Very lucky. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Uh-mazz-ing

You are by far MY FAVORITE writer on here! You know just how to make your characters come alive! Anxiously awaiting more from you! Especially the final chapter of Only You! I am demanding that you post more stories!! ;)

ShalysiaJixShalysiaJixabout 15 years ago
Wow!

What an amazing twist at the end! Completely blew my mind. Really well written. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Love it

I absolutely love it...I love the fact you kept it simple and just perfect...

LoLolandLoLolandover 14 years ago
Awwwww

Thats the first thing that popped into my head when I finished reading this. This is absolutely a cute story. I love it! And 'Strange and Beautiful' is an awesome song.

humminbeanhumminbeanover 14 years ago
Beautiful in lots of ways

Inter-racial, but that really has nothing to do with the story. Romantic, but notwhere near sappy. Surprising, but never shocking. Gentle, mostly. This beautifully evades every cliche and cheap trick to make a moving, steamy story. More!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
BRILLIANT!!!

You never cease to amaze me. I never would have guessed the ending. Girlfriend, you definitely have a gift.

sweetalmondbrownsweetalmondbrownabout 14 years ago
Your Very Own

The last line, when you dedicated this story to your own Trey London...I have to admit, albeit embarassingly, that I "awwwww-ed" out loud. That was a sweet and truly beautiful story.

SatisfyableSatisfyablealmost 14 years ago
WOW--this shit is

good as hell, thanks a lot for a quick good read. Really well written and I could picture everything they did, everything they saw! Way to go!!!

Last_BreathLast_Breathover 13 years ago
Spunky

Ink, leathers, guitar and room for the entertainment centre! I loved this for the simplicity of it. The emotions were vivid, the setting raunchy and execution sublime. Thank you for putting another goofy smile on my face lol Much love - Jen

KittyOh48KittyOh48over 12 years ago
I LOVED IT!

WONDERFULLY SWEET!

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
Glad romance isn't dead

Loved this tale. It was a teaser. Just when you assumed it was on one track..flip and it changed tracks....very nicely.

Thanks for a love story

Marm

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
THANK YOU

Thank you for having a wonderful fun story (about a girl that sounds exactly like me height and all lol) with excellent impeccable grammar. You are a godsend. Keep writing love:P

bbwbeautykissbbwbeautykissabout 12 years ago
AAAwww how sweet!

I definitely wasn't expecting that tyoe if ending!

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 8 years ago
Beautiful

Love how you wrote this, as if Cordie didn't know him. I thought it was a hot consensual encounter and maybe she'd punched out some skank at some point before the story. Really nice misdirection, although since she knew him, why ask him to wear?

So well portrayed, from the biting comments about the skanks to the belting out of the song. Very sensual and evocative--along with the sex. Well done! 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
this was so hot and beautiful.

I hope Trey and you are doing very well 😉

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