by nerd4music
Very good for a short story! Different from your usual style, but very good indeed!
The ending was so surprising it was plainly awesome, good job!
... although I liked this story very much, I think it might have been even better with two men rather than a man and a woman. Surprisingly little would have to change, and it would point up the contrast between the narrator and Trey's groupies very, very nicely.
The story was super sweet I loved it. The only bad thing is the people who dont like the story always have to voice there opinions, I prefer when opinions are given when there is something the author can change and still be true heart of the story.
Actually, i thought it was two guys at first, but i dont think it would have been better that way. I love the twist and it made it all seem more interesting and well done. Great job, and so sweet!
Actually, i thought it was two guys at first, but i dont think it would have been better that way. I love the twist and it made it all seem more interesting and well done. Great job, and so sweet!
sometimes raunchiness isnt always needed to have a great erotic story and you showed it. lovely
What a great story. The sex was hot, the moments tender, and the ending was totally a surprise. Fantastic. Let the haters hate and you do your thing...
The story was delightful.
I appreciated the rendering of the club scene, the snarky heroine, the hot singer and the hotter sex scene. I'm a musician who loves interracial stories (and dating), so this was a fitting setting for me.
I loved it and I look forward to reading your other stories! Please write more and let your fans more than compensate for grumpy haters.
Your stories have always been a treat for me and this one absolutely delivered. I thought it was well-written and well-thought out. Your characters are always believable and I can't wait to read more by you.
your sense of humor coupled with the lovemaking made for a solid story...your line about the stds -- "I suppose she was pretty, if one considers walking STDs attractive." -- had me on the floor...now I'm going to have to click on you and see what else you've written. Jayha Leigh
Humor and sexiness is always a plus for me. He was blazing hot, and what really got me was his...*ahem*...ways of persuasion. His words damn near turned me to putty. And he plays the guitar too? Lord, you've gotta love a man who's a sexy guitar player with a divine voice and Celtic knots to boot. Loved it. Looking forward to reading more.
A well deserved E. Loved the story, the ending made me cry (in a good way). Maybe i'm turning mushy. lol. Anyways loved it. It was perfect.
Loved the twist at the end. I have read all of your stories and anxiously await for more.
a well written story..i loved it and i loved the ending beautiful made me wanna cry( but i'm the romantic mushy type)...oh...its sooo sweet
Oh my goodness,that was adorable. Congratulations and what a way to celebrate your anniversary. You go girl. A+ for originality. Thanks
Gettin' published soon? Would love to read longer versions of more of your stories...LW
Liked the twist and I loved that you gave <i>Strange and Beautiful</i> its kudos.
I have read everything you have published on this site. I have thoroughly enjoyed all of them. Will you be published anytime in the near future? When will we hear more about Tegan and Derek?
WCD
Adored it more than anything. It's just so good. My question is where did you find this magical man and HOW can I get one? You are a luck one girl.
Very lucky. :-)
You are by far MY FAVORITE writer on here! You know just how to make your characters come alive! Anxiously awaiting more from you! Especially the final chapter of Only You! I am demanding that you post more stories!! ;)
What an amazing twist at the end! Completely blew my mind. Really well written. Please write more!
I absolutely love it...I love the fact you kept it simple and just perfect...
Thats the first thing that popped into my head when I finished reading this. This is absolutely a cute story. I love it! And 'Strange and Beautiful' is an awesome song.
Inter-racial, but that really has nothing to do with the story. Romantic, but notwhere near sappy. Surprising, but never shocking. Gentle, mostly. This beautifully evades every cliche and cheap trick to make a moving, steamy story. More!
You never cease to amaze me. I never would have guessed the ending. Girlfriend, you definitely have a gift.
The last line, when you dedicated this story to your own Trey London...I have to admit, albeit embarassingly, that I "awwwww-ed" out loud. That was a sweet and truly beautiful story.
good as hell, thanks a lot for a quick good read. Really well written and I could picture everything they did, everything they saw! Way to go!!!
Ink, leathers, guitar and room for the entertainment centre! I loved this for the simplicity of it. The emotions were vivid, the setting raunchy and execution sublime. Thank you for putting another goofy smile on my face lol Much love - Jen
Loved this tale. It was a teaser. Just when you assumed it was on one track..flip and it changed tracks....very nicely.
Thanks for a love story
Marm
Thank you for having a wonderful fun story (about a girl that sounds exactly like me height and all lol) with excellent impeccable grammar. You are a godsend. Keep writing love:P
Love how you wrote this, as if Cordie didn't know him. I thought it was a hot consensual encounter and maybe she'd punched out some skank at some point before the story. Really nice misdirection, although since she knew him, why ask him to wear?
So well portrayed, from the biting comments about the skanks to the belting out of the song. Very sensual and evocative--along with the sex. Well done! 5*