You were very fortunate in that she lived next door to you. And her misgivings about her ass seemed to open her up for some very erotic play with her. You mentioned that she had a son,so maybe she is not on birth control? What an opening to give her your baby and with her so nearby, for you to add some bodies to her little family?
Very well developed story line. Not too rushed, although the sex scene could have been expanded. Your written English is pretty good and could get even better with a good editor. Keep writing. Very good!
A meat and potatoes erotic tale, the kind I would have imagined should have been the standard of this site yet it's quite the exception. So, keep on, ehhmm...Editor in Chief??
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Anonymous07/09/14
Amazing story, I like the build up with the times they went out drinking didn't do anything. Hopefully you have some more encounters with these two and more assplay too.
English
Very Believable story
I liked this story. It was simple, very believalbe and erotic was well. Looking forward to more from you.
like it
well done for a beginer short and belivable
Loved it!
You were very fortunate in that she lived next door to you. And her misgivings about her ass seemed to open her up for some very erotic play with her. You mentioned that she had a son,so maybe she is not on birth control? What an opening to give her your baby and with her so nearby, for you to add some bodies to her little family?
Great start
Looking forward to more stories from you.
Erotic
Very well developed story line. Not too rushed, although the sex scene could have been expanded. Your written English is pretty good and could get even better with a good editor. Keep writing. Very good!
Meat and potatoes of an erotic tale
A meat and potatoes erotic tale, the kind I would have imagined should have been the standard of this site yet it's quite the exception. So, keep on, ehhmm...Editor in Chief??
Amazing story, I like the build up with the times they went out drinking didn't do anything. Hopefully you have some more encounters with these two and more assplay too.
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