All Comments on 'Hearts and Flowers'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Niiice

Reminds of the song by Steeleye Span called Lady Diamond.

The last line is "And they gave his heart to Lady Diamond" :)

DesertPirateDesertPirateover 16 years ago
Ouch!

Nice hot sex and a wicked end. Well written as usual from you, just not really my cup of tea.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 16 years ago
Idea Pool?

I swear, sometimes I think we drink from the same idea pool! :) Love this concept!

MagicaPracticaMagicaPracticaover 16 years ago
Disturbing

Fast and dirty. An interesting story.

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenover 16 years ago
Wow, gotta love the ending on that one

wicked and pretty disturbing is right. I loved it.

mellowgyrlmellowgyrlover 16 years ago
Hooked!

Wow! You had me hooked all the way to the end!

Emperor_NeroEmperor_Neroabout 16 years ago
Great ending

What a great twist at the end ... and definitely not what you'd expect from a valentines day story. But it works and does so in a horrific, yet somehow believable way. A great job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Gasp!

Oh my!

I'm still in shock - well done!

Good luck in the contest!

slyc_willieslyc_willieabout 16 years ago
Damn well done!

Classic revenge! Can't really say more than that, buddy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
emo

This is one of the best I have ever read! Very emo, very gothic, I loved the ending it was priceless.

secretmesecretmeabout 16 years ago
Ewww! :)

Really I'm more of a romance girl. But it was a good read nonetheless...

SweetWitchSweetWitchabout 16 years ago
Wicked

I was right. You have a very warped mind.

YouKnowILikeItRoughYouKnowILikeItRoughabout 16 years ago
Hahaha

That's hilarious. I love it. A nice change from the sappy V-day stories.

IronDragonIronDragonabout 11 years ago
Ouch!

Even though I saw it coming, it was very well done! 5 big stars here! :)

VyresOfTheArtVyresOfTheArtalmost 11 years ago

Damn, can't get any more warped than that. O.o kinda saw it coming though :p

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