Hearts and Flowers

Niiice

Reminds of the song by Steeleye Span called Lady Diamond.

The last line is "And they gave his heart to Lady Diamond" :)

Ouch!

Nice hot sex and a wicked end. Well written as usual from you, just not really my cup of tea.

Idea Pool?

I swear, sometimes I think we drink from the same idea pool! :) Love this concept!

Disturbing

Fast and dirty. An interesting story.

Wow, gotta love the ending on that one

wicked and pretty disturbing is right. I loved it.

Hooked!

Wow! You had me hooked all the way to the end!

Great ending

What a great twist at the end ... and definitely not what you'd expect from a valentines day story. But it works and does so in a horrific, yet somehow believable way. A great job.

Gasp!

Oh my!

I'm still in shock - well done!

Good luck in the contest!

Damn well done!

Classic revenge! Can't really say more than that, buddy.

emo

This is one of the best I have ever read! Very emo, very gothic, I loved the ending it was priceless.

Ewww! :)

Really I'm more of a romance girl. But it was a good read nonetheless...

Wicked

I was right. You have a very warped mind.

Hahaha

That's hilarious. I love it. A nice change from the sappy V-day stories.

Ouch!

Even though I saw it coming, it was very well done! 5 big stars here! :)

Damn, can't get any more warped than that. O.o kinda saw it coming though :p