This is SO your category! You had me squirming in my chair!
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Anonymous01/22/08
More Please
I want to know more please. Who was Belle? What happens next?
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Anonymous01/22/08
More Please
I loved this story and was very happy it just kept going. I will be reading ll of your other stories, please don't stop this style any time soon. I was wet the whole time and couldn't wait to keep getting wetter. Thank you, this is the first night in a few weeks that I was really turned on by the first story I read.
I will always remember my flight to Belgium with fond memories. I'd like to know what my fellow passengers thought. You had my groaning out loud more than once.
I love the way you write sex. You have a way of moving so much deeper into something that could be considered cliche' if not handled properly. This is absolutely your category. Not only because of your impressive knowledge of the "How to's", but also because of your ability to take the emotion and the intensity of this sphere and turn it into mind sex.
It's not every day that I can read straight sex and have it affect me the way yours does.
All I can say is well done. This is fucking hot. And please don't stop writing. You're damn good at it.
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Anonymous01/23/08
THANK YOU FOR THE ORGASMS! SUPERB AUTHOR!
BRAVO! BRAVO!
I read to the end ---- then masturbated TWICE! Orgasm was SO FABULOUS! I literally soaked the bed-sheet so badly I had to sleep on the other side of the bed! OH GOD! SO WET!
Thank You! Thank You! Thank YOU!
Loved it! Excellent skill and knowledge! At times the side characters were almost a distraction but then the story wouldn't have kept me on so long. Great work!
You're not just getting older, you're getting better, at least as a writer. I'd leave a more fulsome comment, but I'm worn out from trying to figure out the new voting system (which doesn't show up on my 'puter)
Really, about all I can say is WOW. This really isn't my normal cup of tea, but the story drew me in with its imagery and just wouldn't let me stop reading. A great story.
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01/27/08
Oh, my yes. Yes!
Very arousing (swoon!) good descriptions of your character's journey exploring her true submissiveness, nice play on the Valentine's Day idea with the naughty toy.
Well done!
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Anonymous01/28/08
cant wait for more
The story was fabulous, in depth , not just a shallow rendering of the processes that she is going through to reach her submission. I would love to see what devlopes between them, also not sure if I missed it in your other stories... it would be wonderful to hear about his first girl he had for so long ...
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Anonymous02/01/08
Hot, well-developed read
Enjoyed the story very much. Loved the development of her being drawn into submission.
A few editorial comments: the pace lagged at times with a few too many orgasms (is there really such a thing as too many orgasms?). In a few spots her reactions to things were a bit over the top. Finally, find a new word for "shiver."
It reminds me of things about myself that I'd forgotten. To vicariously live Jessica's experience was excruciatingly sweet torture. You've put some of my own fantasies online.
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Anonymous02/03/08
WOW!
One of the best stories I've read on the site. Great writing, well edited, rich and full of life. Congratulations on the result of your work.
Loved the buildup, seduction, and eventual submission of Rebecca. The scenes and emotions were finely detailed while leaving enough to the imagination. Excellently done, Tx.
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Anonymous02/09/08
DAMN
omg, i was wet fromt the time she was playing with herself all the way to the end, dang I LOVED the creativity, and senitivity to what women get pleasure out of, you truly do know what you are talking about, GREAT story, loved it
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Anonymous02/13/08
Absolutely beautiful!
Thank you. This is what BDSM should be. Not only that, but it is an extremely well written piece of literature.
by
Anonymous02/15/08
Gorgeous
It's the slow, detailed, teasing pace and the psychological focus that make your story such a standout...I will bookmark this one. Thank you.
by
Anonymous02/15/08
Amazing!!!
That was one of the best stories I have read. You have a real talent for writing. Love the anticipation. Thank you.
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Anonymous02/17/08
Can't wait for Bound 2, 3, 4...
I really enjoyed this story and can'y wait for Bound 2, 3, 4, 10, 20, etc. Keep up the good work.
Brand new to the site, and found this... I could *feel* those orgasms you describe. And it definitely gave me some ideas to try out. Congratulations on an incredible story.
This is hands down the best story! The anticipation and tension were extraordinary and the pure sexual energy unbelievable. I hope this will only be the beginning of Jessica's story.
Wonderful job!
Raven
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Anonymous02/29/08
Smokin!!!
Someone who finally understands (and can write) that a mind fuck is the best foreplay ever. I've never read any of your stories before but I definitely will read them all now. Keep it up, this was the most phenomenal story I have ever read on this site. How did you only get 2nd place in the contest??????
That's the only way to describe this wonderfully written tale. With many thanks from a greatful reader.
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Anonymous03/17/08
Powerful
I've read this more than once and have had many great pleasures. Thank You!
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Anonymous04/21/08
Wow!
I know it's been said before, but it needs to be said again.
That was absolutely brilliant. Thank you!
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Anonymous07/18/08
awsome job
looking forward to more of your work
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Anonymous12/16/08
for crying out loud...
I really wanted to give this story a five stars but the character of Jackson was too tpainful to read. Why not just have him say "yes, massa" and do the cakewalk while you're at it? It's almost 2009, not the 1930s.
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Anonymous01/14/09
Thank you
Your BDSM stories are quickly becoming my favorites, especially this one. Other than Sir_Nathan it is hard for me to find authors that can write stories about couples that have a loving relationship and enjoy more than just vanilla sex. Please write more on this couple. Thanks again.
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Anonymous05/10/09
loved it but jackson??? pleaseeeeee
brilliant but would have enjoyed it better without the jackson stereotype
I read with fastination and could so identify with your lady in my fantasy. Inasmuch as the entire creativity was erotic and fun to read, the last paragraph brought the entire focus to bear. I look forward to your next creation. j
take care of myself, then come back and finish it.
Thanks for that!
I'll be back for more soon xo
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Anonymous07/10/09
Wonderful
That was perfect...they loved each other which I really like. My only problem was with Jackson. What was the point of him and why did he have to be black?
English
Please Sir, can I have some more?
That was such a hot story, I can't wait to read more of what you've written!
Very very nice
Amazing sexy hot. Kept me reading all the way through. For once I was happy that there were lots of pages. Tasty very tasty. Thank you. Xantu
Wonderful
Absolutely wonderful, sexy and loving. I can only hope to aspire to be able to write a story as well done as this one some day.
AMAZING...THANKYOU!
Amazing ...has kept me hot horny and fully entertained all afternoon...THANKYOU!
Delicious
What more can I say? Well done!
Great Story!!!
Nice build up, good story, great ending
you got skills
not only was the story hot and awesome, your writing skills are amazing.
This is...
This is SO your category! You had me squirming in my chair!
More Please
I want to know more please. Who was Belle? What happens next?
More Please
I loved this story and was very happy it just kept going. I will be reading ll of your other stories, please don't stop this style any time soon. I was wet the whole time and couldn't wait to keep getting wetter. Thank you, this is the first night in a few weeks that I was really turned on by the first story I read.
Marvelous storytelling
That was smokin'!
holy!
Wow
this story totally did it for me. talk about HOTTTTT!!!!!
fantastic
brilliant-had me glued to my seat :-)
Goodness . . .
I will always remember my flight to Belgium with fond memories. I'd like to know what my fellow passengers thought. You had my groaning out loud more than once.
I love the way you write sex. You have a way of moving so much deeper into something that could be considered cliche' if not handled properly. This is absolutely your category. Not only because of your impressive knowledge of the "How to's", but also because of your ability to take the emotion and the intensity of this sphere and turn it into mind sex.
It's not every day that I can read straight sex and have it affect me the way yours does.
All I can say is well done. This is fucking hot. And please don't stop writing. You're damn good at it.
THANK YOU FOR THE ORGASMS! SUPERB AUTHOR!
BRAVO! BRAVO!
I read to the end ---- then masturbated TWICE! Orgasm was SO FABULOUS! I literally soaked the bed-sheet so badly I had to sleep on the other side of the bed! OH GOD! SO WET!
Thank You! Thank You! Thank YOU!
Thank you!
Loved it! Excellent skill and knowledge! At times the side characters were almost a distraction but then the story wouldn't have kept me on so long. Great work!
Great Story...
I loved it. (Mmmm..redheads...)
You done did good, hoss
You're not just getting older, you're getting better, at least as a writer. I'd leave a more fulsome comment, but I'm worn out from trying to figure out the new voting system (which doesn't show up on my 'puter)
Delicious
This story made me so wet. I want to be Jessica! Well done TxRad.
OMG!!
The very best I've read in this genre. My, what a story!
Wow
Really, about all I can say is WOW. This really isn't my normal cup of tea, but the story drew me in with its imagery and just wouldn't let me stop reading. A great story.
Oh, my yes. Yes!
Very arousing (swoon!) good descriptions of your character's journey exploring her true submissiveness, nice play on the Valentine's Day idea with the naughty toy.
Well done!
cant wait for more
The story was fabulous, in depth , not just a shallow rendering of the processes that she is going through to reach her submission. I would love to see what devlopes between them, also not sure if I missed it in your other stories... it would be wonderful to hear about his first girl he had for so long ...
Hot, well-developed read
Enjoyed the story very much. Loved the development of her being drawn into submission.
A few editorial comments: the pace lagged at times with a few too many orgasms (is there really such a thing as too many orgasms?). In a few spots her reactions to things were a bit over the top. Finally, find a new word for "shiver."
It excites the exhibitionist/submissive in me!
It reminds me of things about myself that I'd forgotten. To vicariously live Jessica's experience was excruciatingly sweet torture. You've put some of my own fantasies online.
WOW!
One of the best stories I've read on the site. Great writing, well edited, rich and full of life. Congratulations on the result of your work.
Very good!
If this was any hotter my monitor would have melted! Well done Tx.
Decadent
Loved the buildup, seduction, and eventual submission of Rebecca. The scenes and emotions were finely detailed while leaving enough to the imagination. Excellently done, Tx.
DAMN
omg, i was wet fromt the time she was playing with herself all the way to the end, dang I LOVED the creativity, and senitivity to what women get pleasure out of, you truly do know what you are talking about, GREAT story, loved it
Absolutely beautiful!
Thank you. This is what BDSM should be. Not only that, but it is an extremely well written piece of literature.
Gorgeous
It's the slow, detailed, teasing pace and the psychological focus that make your story such a standout...I will bookmark this one. Thank you.
Amazing!!!
That was one of the best stories I have read. You have a real talent for writing. Love the anticipation. Thank you.
Can't wait for Bound 2, 3, 4...
I really enjoyed this story and can'y wait for Bound 2, 3, 4, 10, 20, etc. Keep up the good work.
SpellBound
I lusted it from the first word to the last. I hope there's more to their journey that you choose to share with us.
Speechless
I'm speechless. it was the best story i have ever read. I hope you will write more on Jessica. I cant wait to read the rest of her story. Thank You!
holy cow!
Brand new to the site, and found this... I could *feel* those orgasms you describe. And it definitely gave me some ideas to try out. Congratulations on an incredible story.
Wow!
That was perfect!
Wow! Absolutely Incredible!!!
This is hands down the best story! The anticipation and tension were extraordinary and the pure sexual energy unbelievable. I hope this will only be the beginning of Jessica's story.
Wonderful job!
Raven
Smokin!!!
Someone who finally understands (and can write) that a mind fuck is the best foreplay ever. I've never read any of your stories before but I definitely will read them all now. Keep it up, this was the most phenomenal story I have ever read on this site. How did you only get 2nd place in the contest??????
Beautiful
That's the only way to describe this wonderfully written tale. With many thanks from a greatful reader.
Powerful
I've read this more than once and have had many great pleasures. Thank You!
Wow!
I know it's been said before, but it needs to be said again.
That was absolutely brilliant. Thank you!
awsome job
looking forward to more of your work
for crying out loud...
I really wanted to give this story a five stars but the character of Jackson was too tpainful to read. Why not just have him say "yes, massa" and do the cakewalk while you're at it? It's almost 2009, not the 1930s.
Thank you
Your BDSM stories are quickly becoming my favorites, especially this one. Other than Sir_Nathan it is hard for me to find authors that can write stories about couples that have a loving relationship and enjoy more than just vanilla sex. Please write more on this couple. Thanks again.
loved it but jackson??? pleaseeeeee
brilliant but would have enjoyed it better without the jackson stereotype
Real Life Love
I read with fastination and could so identify with your lady in my fantasy. Inasmuch as the entire creativity was erotic and fun to read, the last paragraph brought the entire focus to bear. I look forward to your next creation. j
I had to pause
take care of myself, then come back and finish it.
Thanks for that!
I'll be back for more soon xo
Wonderful
That was perfect...they loved each other which I really like. My only problem was with Jackson. What was the point of him and why did he have to be black?
that was amazing
i just had to tell you how much i loved that story it is by far my fav
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