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Hope is a Thing With Zeroes

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by twelveoone01/20/08

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Great lead line, nice title, very well done. I would think about moving Baby-blue together, instead of the line break.

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by LeBroz01/21/08

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Middle-class lament, too familiar to too many. Oh so easy to identify with...

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by KOLKORE01/22/08

Keep hoping through...

If you made it to the end of your poem I still have some hope for you. Even more than hope on the poetry part. Fun would be the wrong word, but we all know that we sing our pain just as much as we do when we rejoice.

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by WickedEve01/22/08

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Those last three lines are killer. :)

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