by sue43mom
What a sexy poem. Maybe you could make it into a full story. I would love to hear about you and Luke.
Warm, loving and incredibly erotic.
Bravo, you lucky, beautiful woman.
Aswpc
Fabulous, very succinct and erotic. Best of all, it's my favourite theme of incest!
Very nice poem, filled with tenderness and love.
The end is unexpected and sharp. Or is it really unexpected ?
Lovely Poem dear Sue,
Full of True Love and sweet romantic tenderness mmmmmm
Make my lips got wet mmmmm
Thank you!
Aunt Helena
54yo Lesbian Aunt from Portugal
Your short but delightful poem tells the entire story and all the important points are there for all to appreciate. Thank you.
I love it when there's Something For Everyone!
Looking forward to my dinner invitation...I'll bring the wine! :+))
You conveyed so much in such a few stanzas, that is remarkable writing. My mind is captured with what had happened, what might have happened, what will be to come. Very well done, thanks!
What a beautiful poem about the joys of Family love..
Very impressed with your writing Sue 😍Hopefully in the near future you could grace us with a story perhaps?
I'll keep my fingers crossed...
Brian...