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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
This plot is so old it's grandmother has a

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dapperdan4dapperdan4about 16 years ago
nice job

It may be an old plot... but you did it very well. Kudos for not adding the oh-so-common giving in and finding way too much pleasure from the chick. It loses the non-consent at that point!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
strange mis-spellings

The correct spelling is "nod," not "knod" - truly an unusual mis-spelling. The only part that was really gross was when he made her suck his dick after he fucked her in the ass. Thinking of all those organisms in the bowel that are not supposed to be in your digestive tract was truly disgusting.

kvertedkvertedalmost 16 years ago
love it

i adore this story.

i fell in love with ren in a sense, i check back daily to see if you've written more to the line.

your work is amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Multiple brutal rapes but it's ok - they used a condom.

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