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Enjoyed it
This story is probably mis-categorized under romance. I would have put it in the humor category. Anyway, I found it both amusing and hot.
Loved it
Some of your best work yet. Keep up the good work!
what a hottie
well written and veryvery hot
Brilliantly written
This is, without doubt, your best work yet. It has everything a reader could wish for. It's sensitive, sensuous, amusing, and highly "arousing". Who could possibly ask for more?
Thankyou,
Brian. (UK)
Very amusing
Had me on my toes until the end, wondering what devilish thing she would think up next!
Great work!
Maharat
WOW!!!
THIS WAS A TERRIFIC STORY. I LOVED IT AND WAS WAITING TO SEE WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN. UNTIL I GOT TO THE END. WHERE IS THE REST OF THE STORY????????
:)
Seriously hot. sizzling almost :) Cheers Yoron.
awesome awesod
omg you need to write a sequel i loved it
need another chapter
definitely need another chapter. continue with the date with exquisite details about the hot sex after or just making out.....looking forward to it!!!!!!!!
SO coolio
More!¬
Garbage
Bring on the trash truck.
First prize.
......in the bad writing contest
Rarely have I encountered such a load of old bollocks!
Characters
Sorry couldn't even start to like the boss or Anyone in his family. Found this story to be mostly about using and manipulation. There was no romance in this story. I do not believe she loves him at all.
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