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by Anonymous01/26/08

What a pile of steaming CRAP!!!

This had no plot, no motive and no freaking point. Unless you want to write something that makes sense, do us all a favor and NEVER EVER write again. Thank you.

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by sharezade08/25/10

A very interesting scene.

This is a good start to...something. Not sure what, though, I like the idea.

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