All Comments on 'Allison's Day'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
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Very erotic and sexy as hell. I can picture the story and it made me very horny. Please continue.

SyrivenSyrivenabout 16 years ago
Nice job dude!

Very sexy, i could picture the whole thing as I was reading. Definitely awesome for a first story!

The one problem I had was that the sex seemed like it could have lasted longer, to me.

I hope you write more!

vet42vet42about 16 years ago
Awesome!

Her carnal instinct kicked in as...

At first I read that as, "Her carnal instinct kicked her in the ass..." LOL.

Great man. I like your writing style, you don't overfill the dialouge with a load of unecessay he said's and she replied's...I love it when the writer just allows the characters speak....something I'm working on myself.

By the way, your characters are likeable and believable!

Excellent...please write more about her entrance into exhibitionism.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
first of many?

Brilliant first story. Sexy lady bribed to expose herself. Would have like more detail on the showing off, and a little (no need for more than a line) on how she looked.

Keep up the good work.

Gitano71Gitano71almost 16 years ago
Very good

I enjoyed this one alot.

Very nice teasing.

Part 2 was good as well.

Hope to see more from you.

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 15 years ago
Nicely done!

I'm definitely going to read more of your stories. Keep 'em coming!

deedles38deedles38about 14 years ago
New Beginnings!

Nothing like thrill of the first few times of showing your body! Ooooh! This story made me shiver and I was wanting to be with the characters. Keep writing!

MissSensesMissSensesabout 13 years ago
Great Story!

It's fun to push the envelope. Ha ha ha :-)

GmogrosGmogrosover 11 years ago
Loved it!

Perfect story, thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A lot like we started.

When I started dating my wife told her if she wanted to be with me she had to quit wearing underwear and let guys "accidentally" see her tits, ass and pussy. She was reluctant at first but after the first few times and the rush she got she was hooked. Ever since we have helped each other expose ourselves and are naked all the time in and around our house and invite our friends to join us. We enjoy reading your stories because they are so similar to our experieces. Bare469

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The best way is to wear a short skirt with no paties and squat down to let guys on the other side of the shelves look through the shelves and up my skirt to my open legs and all the way up to my open kitty.

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