Taboo

GOOD

A straightforward mon/son story,the sort of thing that will all ways find an audience,men and women alike .I especially liked how you avoided crude language and reference to huge.. ,well you know what I mean.Hope you write more on this subject ,maybe a little longer next time,thanks for the read.

Great job! Please hurry with more!

This is wonderful! Please continue! I'm really enjoying it!

nice beginning..but

nice beginning..but include terrance in the action with celeste and jeff...and since we have been told that celeste and terrance always had been a totally uninhibited couple open to everything...would be terrific for celeste to get jeff and terrance in to not only sharing her together..in all ways..but..for her... to watch and join in with some really hot bi dad/son fun between terrance and their son...and her becoming their hot cum slut wife/mom which she really cums to need and want...and which women like myself love to read about and hopefully do..

Good

Loving wives with a twist.

Nice job

Good start to what could be a very interesting story. Please continue.

no it's not finished ..

very good story .. dont say its finished .. waiting for some more ..

MAKING LOVE TO MOM

WOW WHAT AN EXCITING STORY. TABOO. I THINK THERE SHOULD BE ANOTHER PART IN THIS FANTASTIC STORY

Well done... although once their sex started it could have been more detailed and hotly described. He should have left a load in her belly, too... something she would sense and savor during the next day after he's gone... making mental note of when his next visits will be. Had a nice tease ending.

A fine story of...

son and mom messing around. But I agree with the last anon. Sure, a mother giving her boy a loving motherly blowjob is great. But best of all is when a boy sticks his big stiff prick up his mother's mommy-hole and blows his young balls up the same cunt he came out of. Maybe this talented writer will contribute a tale of true motherfucking?

Godess of sex

You are hereby declared as Godess of sex ... So horny yet so simply put.

Hats off to you and please make sure to keep writing on this segment

Cheers ... Bubbs

Good start to this tale

You should write a second chapter in which Jeff comes back home while his father is away, and takes Celeste again, but unbeknownst to Jeff, his Mother has been off all birth control, since his father hasn't been doing his duty in the bedroom, and his Mother is very fertile for breeding by her hung son. So Celeste willingly, and proudly winds up pregnant by Jeff, at least twice. All the while having Terrence screw her after Jeff does so he'll think that he's the father.