All Comments on 'Tylarah FireWynd Ch. 01'

i wrote loads and it made no sense so im just saying trust me you no im hard on you for this but you have matured so much and i am lookign forward to how personal this story is to us. I think u need to tone the wiganese a bit cos ppl dont understand lol, and if u need ur muse just ring me, and ill name shit for ye. love u loads and catn wait for more- spesh as i can help u to rewrite it

Hovis

P.s. u will have to help me make a book one day, cos im good as story and ur good at sex, and that little thingy i made for you the other nite would be class with ur sparkle touch. Sorry for ne typos but u no i dnt really care.

Loves and hugs and WRITE WHOLE CHAPTERS! x

She needs to torture him more, and he needs to stay at being a weasel the whole way.