All Comments on 'Chinese Water Torture'

Mentioned on the new poems thread. :)

Simple so it doesn't overwhelm the reader, but effective and yes, either erotic or non. I like the sand/pebble/rocks images: they pull the piece together, give it cohesiveness. Nice to see a poem from you. :)

Happy to see you're writing (here) again, tiny dancer...your readers have missed you.

It seems to just scream out for two more words at the end:<br>

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<i>with pleasure</i><br>

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though it works so much better with them implied.

I have been missing you. -Russ

To have One who made me feel that way...His strength, His voice, His touch enveloping me. The very depth of Him piercing my soul.

Miss seeing you duckie, *hugs*

is it not? missed you babe. good to see your work again. as another has said, your readers have indeed missed you.

Nice to see you still about. I think of you every so often. Hope you are happy, healthy and well.

~ brightie