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by champagne198201/25/08

Royalty

cums in many 'guises. I really enjoyed reading this poem. There are a couple of errors that caused me to pause in it though. Spasoming is actually spelled "spasming" and when you write of bachial do you really mean to refer to the bacchanal revels that surrounded the ancient Greek party god, Bacchus? I think a minute to submit a quick edit of this poem would be worthwhile. Thanks for sharing this poem. I was smiling throughout.

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by LeBroz01/26/08

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A clit with a mind of her own — listen to the clit.

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