It was a little slow at first but really enjoyable at the end ;)
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Anonymous10/19/12
Great writing!
You're really good! It helps that this is a fantasy I own, but your writing is smooth and clear. You know how to arouse. Excellent story. I wish there were more.
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Nice story, goldeniangel. I just discovered you and can hardly wait to read more of your stories (you sure have a lot on LE).
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It was a little slow at first but really enjoyable at the end ;)
Great writing!
You're really good! It helps that this is a fantasy I own, but your writing is smooth and clear. You know how to arouse. Excellent story. I wish there were more.
good read
Good balance of enough detail while still being short and sweet. Descriptions used were arousing.
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