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Very nice — it has an almost mystical aura about it.
foxes
I enjoyed the poem and most of all thought of the two foxes that frequent my back yard to eat the dogs food (~_~)
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I wonder what the don't use adverbs, -ing ending group thinks?
You know some of these lines seem to mirror the speed of the action.
Give me more!
Give me more poetic magical tales, under the moon. I just swoon.
Ing ?
In this case the sitting, lying, rising, 'ing words work quite well almost like mini commas changing the pace.
Dump "like a phantom" ugh'
dumping...
she glides like a black kite into the night air, perhaps. oddly enough, this is a poem based on fact.
Foehn,
I am sure you would agree that just because something actually happened does not preclude it being or at least being perceived as being magical...
Coming to think of it I would tend to think of it as even more magical! :-)
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