Very, very good!!! Wonderfully written, I am waiting for more!!!
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Anonymous02/01/08
awesome
luv it.....luv reading M/M, bi from the ladies view....can't wait for more.....great job.....the rimming topped this story.....hope the lady will get tongue and give a tongue......
kurdt
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Anonymous02/01/08
Like it very much.
Hot and sensual writing. Got me locked in straight away and great bits of detail about sensations. Looking forward to next act: don't keep her waiting too long!
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Anonymous02/01/08
hot/erotic bi story
totally agree about mfm bi action as major turn-on for women like myself...as well as a majority of women...as well as alot of curious bi studs.. and yet most totally omit this type of scenerio...hope you might put your creative writing talent to work and tell us about a hot sexy family..where bi dad and mom share their stud/jock
son(s).... and mom insists that dad and son(s) get into hot bi action with her directing and participating...biggggg turn-on...especially with your use of hot and "nasty" dialogue...
English
hi
very hot!! I want more
Great Story
I loved the story can not wait to read more.
Fantastic!!!
Very, very good!!! Wonderfully written, I am waiting for more!!!
awesome
luv it.....luv reading M/M, bi from the ladies view....can't wait for more.....great job.....the rimming topped this story.....hope the lady will get tongue and give a tongue......
kurdt
Like it very much.
Hot and sensual writing. Got me locked in straight away and great bits of detail about sensations. Looking forward to next act: don't keep her waiting too long!
hot/erotic bi story
totally agree about mfm bi action as major turn-on for women like myself...as well as a majority of women...as well as alot of curious bi studs.. and yet most totally omit this type of scenerio...hope you might put your creative writing talent to work and tell us about a hot sexy family..where bi dad and mom share their stud/jock
son(s).... and mom insists that dad and son(s) get into hot bi action with her directing and participating...biggggg turn-on...especially with your use of hot and "nasty" dialogue...
Hot!
That was amazing beyond words. Definitely needs continuing. FAB!!!
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