All Comments on 'Stolen Ch. 02'

I am going to wait on this one and just keep reading. It seems to be going in a good direction but I am not sure. I still like your other series better.

It is hard to get it when the guy is alternating between extremely brutal and supposedly gentle and thoughtful, and it is very hard to buy that she would get aroused by him after such brutal traumatizing rape. You have some good writing talent, but it would help to make things more consistent.

It's like your train of thought keeps jumping the track.