Why a "vignette"? You successfully packed all that we needed for the segment of life you described. It was wodefully done, using restrained tone almost to the end. It amplified the inner conflict of the woman, and created the contast with the erotic end. It proves again that the women in Literotica provide in records some of the best erotic writes.
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W.T.F.
Nice hot story,thanks!
A hot vignette
Concise and hot vignette =thanks.
Much more than a vignette!
Why a "vignette"? You successfully packed all that we needed for the segment of life you described. It was wodefully done, using restrained tone almost to the end. It amplified the inner conflict of the woman, and created the contast with the erotic end. It proves again that the women in Literotica provide in records some of the best erotic writes.
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For sharing.
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