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Body Walking

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by Anonymous

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by Angeline01/29/08

Great images

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

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by UnderYourSpell01/29/08

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"Hold you with my silken smile" mmmmmm can see it too !

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by foehn201/30/08

word-by-word

I could take this poem, word by word, and write a 5,000 word essay about it. But that would never equal the poem. Great use of language; rarely, if ever, have I read a poem that was prettier.

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by twelveoone02/03/08

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What I liked most is the almost reprise.(You did say, just take.) You show an adroit use of repitition.

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