by swallowedscream
Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!
I could take this poem, word by word, and write a 5,000 word essay about it. But that would never equal the poem. Great use of language; rarely, if ever, have I read a poem that was prettier.
What I liked most is the almost reprise.(You did say, just take.) You show an adroit use of repitition.