All Comments on 'Best Friends Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
get pat's dad into the scenerio

keep it going..but get pat's dad into the action with all three studs tag teaming roni and having the guys get into more bi action especially with pat's dad... with roni directing and participating in this hottt action... which she like many women including myself... turn on to in a big way..

hazel_eyed_boyhazel_eyed_boyabout 16 years ago
Still hot

I'm still enjoying this story, and the cliffhanger has me really excited for the next one. I'd just like to warn you to check your grammar. At the end, you wrote "you ass fucked" where you meant "your ass fucked." That you/your issue happened at one other point during the story. But yeah, those sorts of things are quick fixes if you give the piece a read-through.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Excellent

Have both of them fuck him, her with a dildo and him with his cock.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
you had me until the ass licking

for two virgin boys to do something so quick I find it hard to believe they would willingly eat juices out of her ass... you gotta ease into the kinky stuff

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