Deidre's Faerie Tale

Great Chapter!!

You have a very good handle on the plot and character development. You're doing a great job so please continue and update soon :)

Awesome

I am going to enjoy this one! Keep up the good work

I hope that you are planning to continue

This is a nice, too short story that sets the stage for further chapters. I hope that you plan on continuing.

Oh Boy

You are on a roll here. I do enjoy your work. Keep going you have a long term fan of your stories here.

Great Story!

This a great story! the Vacuum reminded me of Dyson overpriced cheap crap LOL fit the description to a tee and what had me rolling:

"Of course she would think that, I fumed, the woman was twice divorced and came to work with cat hair all over her clothes."

The cat lady boss LOL

I thought it was a good story. But did anyone else think the main character was man at first? Good beginning, continue.

good read

Your story seems very interesting. Looking forward to reading.

ok that is just creepy

I went to a Polk Elementary when I was a kid...