by StevoHawk
...and this writer is a pathetic wimp. These writers of wimp husband & slut wife stories all use the same theme in their "stories," namely that being humiliated and unable to satisfy your woman is sexy. It isn't, of course. It's pitiful but this writer won't ever see it. Poor fellow. As for the writing, well, let's just say this "writer" isn't any competition to the real writers on this website.
I thought it was very good, not sure what the problem is with the other comments, I love it.
if you don't like it than don't read it. this is erotic fiction, no one needs to be judging here. enjoy literotica for what it is....
is the use of the word "boobies". As a woman, it is an instant turn off since it seems so juvenile. The rest of the story was hot, no need for people to be judging your fetishes.
There is a big difference between erotica and porn which most of your readers dont understand
Ignore all the less than glowing comments...this was a HOT story. It really shouldn't matter which category someone chooses to use, it's still about sex. This site IS LitEROTICA. It was well written, with good descriptions, good spelling and good grammar. And did I mention it is HOT?
So just when DID you and my husband meet?
Ok, I love porn and like erotica... see I know the difference.
Amazing stuff ! Very well paced and the sexual descriptions are just great.
Sorry, you need to name your characters better than that. Also, only men measure cocks, so I guess this story is aimed only at men.