All Comments on 'Thursday Morning Wank'

'Ohh, ohh Yeah, ohhhh Yeah!!!!!' that was lovely... ;P

Loved your story, what a great beginning for you as a writer - do hope that you write lots more for Lit. Good description throughout and I couldn't help wondering if the knickers you were wearing in bed were the same as the sexy pale blue ones you're wearing in your pic :) I've always found it really hot knowing that a girl wears panties and a cotton vest in bed ... Mmmm, your story did it for me - thank you!

There's nothing better than waking up all tingly and masturbating myself silly. I loved hearing this same enjoyment from a woman's perspective, and expressed so vividly in this story. Thanks. More to come?

I liked your story, it was a good first try. something I did find rather distracting were the jumps back and forth from past to present tense. it confuses the sequence of events.

that said, I liked the voice of your narration and I look forward to your next piece.

Purrrks

I enjoyed this story too. Good work and I can relate to an early morning orgasm, gets my day going.

The format of print at Literotica requires paragraphs to be much shorter, something to think about.

Hope you keep it up.

Jently

love to jerk-off to stories like this....thanks and keep them cumming!

Great start, keep up the good work, very erotic and well written story. Lovely pic too...

Loved your short story, keep writing and arousing.

I have just done it, hehehe

It was pretty good, for a first timer, that is. I've got something slightly over a chubby, but I'm more into Incest, so don't take it personally that I myself didn't "wank". Only serious comment I have is to work on your grammar a bit, and re-read your submission, because I saw a few minor mistakes. Seriously, grammatical mistakes can turn a good few guys off mid-wank.

Wow Babe your great I am truely looking foward to reading more. Not only was it GREAT!! Because that was bold but your a writer I could visualize everything I'm adding to favorite and adding you to my favorite author. I truely hope to hear from you soon.

Take Care Till Then and I hope you have even more bold and daring adventures.

Eric

Great story to wank to, made my cock very hard thinking about your unashamed masturbation, love the fact you call it wanking. cheers Richard NZ

Oh what a lovely story to read first thing in the morning!

I was there with you, in every sense ;)

I enjoyed your story, "Thursday Morning Wank" that's one way to start your morning.

But girl what I enjoyed most, was what you wrote in your biography; "If I was interested in dicks, I wouldn't be a lesbian!!!" I couldn't have put it any better myself!!

Gay Kat.

Nicely told with good writing and pace - the sex was deliciously arousing too! I have to say, had I been one of your housemates I would have been more than a little tempted to join in along side you.

There where a few typos so I will pass on the same advice as I received with my first story and see if you can find an editor. Above all though, please keep writing.

I don't care if it was your first, I loved it. Nice setting and plot, I could only hope it had a bit of truth to it.....Another story please!

Hallo Fiona,

wow, this is the third time I've read "Thursday Morning Wank", and still just as hot!

But love I have to tell you,,, I don't know what sort of shy timid little wallflowers you were living with,,, because if I had been there, your Thursday morning wank,,, would've turned into a full-on hot Thursday morning fucking!! I might have even tried something really yummy and kinky!

5&5 _ 5-Stars and 5-Very Kinky Orgasms, :-) ..

Your kinky dyke friend,

Gay Kat.

I just love the description, it's almost as if I can hear you from outsde the door myself and listening to someone getting off is one of life's great pleasures.

Wow... This Is Hot,,, Yes!

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Hallo Fiona,

I can't say it better than I did 5-years ago, "Thursday Morning Wank", is still just as hot!

Now Love, if I had been there, your Thursday morning wank,,, would've turned into a full-on hot Thursday morning fucking,,, yes!

5-Stars and 5-Hot Kinky Orgasms, :-) ..

Your kinky dyke friends,

The Black Queen and Gay Kat!