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sweet!
'Ohh, ohh Yeah, ohhhh Yeah!!!!!' that was lovely... ;P
A great beginning!
Loved your story, what a great beginning for you as a writer - do hope that you write lots more for Lit. Good description throughout and I couldn't help wondering if the knickers you were wearing in bed were the same as the sexy pale blue ones you're wearing in your pic :) I've always found it really hot knowing that a girl wears panties and a cotton vest in bed ... Mmmm, your story did it for me - thank you!
Loved it
There's nothing better than waking up all tingly and masturbating myself silly. I loved hearing this same enjoyment from a woman's perspective, and expressed so vividly in this story. Thanks. More to come?
fun and playful - your tenses need polishing
I liked your story, it was a good first try. something I did find rather distracting were the jumps back and forth from past to present tense. it confuses the sequence of events.
that said, I liked the voice of your narration and I look forward to your next piece.
Purrrks
Nice work
I enjoyed this story too. Good work and I can relate to an early morning orgasm, gets my day going.
The format of print at Literotica requires paragraphs to be much shorter, something to think about.
Hope you keep it up.
Jently
made a mess..
love to jerk-off to stories like this....thanks and keep them cumming!
Well done
Great start, keep up the good work, very erotic and well written story. Lovely pic too...
Yummy
Loved your short story, keep writing and arousing.
yummy
I have just done it, hehehe
Not too bad
It was pretty good, for a first timer, that is. I've got something slightly over a chubby, but I'm more into Incest, so don't take it personally that I myself didn't "wank". Only serious comment I have is to work on your grammar a bit, and re-read your submission, because I saw a few minor mistakes. Seriously, grammatical mistakes can turn a good few guys off mid-wank.
Wow!!!
Wow Babe your great I am truely looking foward to reading more. Not only was it GREAT!! Because that was bold but your a writer I could visualize everything I'm adding to favorite and adding you to my favorite author. I truely hope to hear from you soon.
Take Care Till Then and I hope you have even more bold and daring adventures.
Eric
Nice
Great story to wank to, made my cock very hard thinking about your unashamed masturbation, love the fact you call it wanking. cheers Richard NZ
Yessssssssss
Oh what a lovely story to read first thing in the morning!
I was there with you, in every sense ;)
Hi Foxy Fiona, _ Ohhh Yesss!
I enjoyed your story, "Thursday Morning Wank" that's one way to start your morning.
But girl what I enjoyed most, was what you wrote in your biography; "If I was interested in dicks, I wouldn't be a lesbian!!!" I couldn't have put it any better myself!!
Gay Kat.
A very good first story
Nicely told with good writing and pace - the sex was deliciously arousing too! I have to say, had I been one of your housemates I would have been more than a little tempted to join in along side you.
There where a few typos so I will pass on the same advice as I received with my first story and see if you can find an editor. Above all though, please keep writing.
great story!
I don't care if it was your first, I loved it. Nice setting and plot, I could only hope it had a bit of truth to it.....Another story please!
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