Who said this is about plums? I think if you shifted the line breaks a bit--and specially if you got "sucking globes of perfection" on one line, there would be no question as to subject! ;)
With Angeline, uh-huh, plums .. yep..
pouty plump seduction, very clever-
very clever word play..
I like, I like it alot !
I prefer that my plums ripen and remain untouched while I savor another sort of fruit......
There is succulent imagery, and a tasty bounce to this piece, I really like it. I have a bit of a problem with the plums sucking juice and breathing aroma, though. That is, if I'm reading this right and the plums are breasts. If they are NOT breasts, then I'm more confused than usual, but this is still a nicely re-readable work. Thanks for the read.
Made them sound so inviting,I almost wanted to taste those plums myself-which are generally not my fruit of choice *wink* great read, thanks! :D
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