Not bad,could have been longer with more build up but still erotic. Thanks!
by
Anonymous02/07/08
Good thing for him that HE will never get old
If I was the husband, I would have left the room ...to pack. If he didn't, there could be no conquest for the stud in taking her from such a wimp.
Nobody wins.The stud gets an aging floozy with no shame or loyalty. The bitch gets an arrogant, immature, simple-minded lothario. The husband, hopefully, gets out with a fresh start.
by
Anonymous02/07/08
Another UK Self Cuckold Lullaby
Your bio indicates interest in all things living but who would give you any serious time after seeing your proclivity here for male humiliation - hardly interesting - just sick.
You stirred emotion - but it was anger for your contortion and disrespect for a man you created.
by
Anonymous02/07/08
Collection ?
Was'nt this website supposed to be a collection of erotica?
Instead it is a collection of some of the worst stories around, this being one prime example
by
Anonymous02/07/08
You Say
You say you are a blond british guy,do you mean Gay?
by
Anonymous02/07/08
from a cuck's perspective
The sour comments are not from cuck's- these grumps just dont get the lifestyle. I enjoyed the story.
by
Anonymous02/07/08
Ah! Literotica!
Where else would one find a choice collection of the worst writers of our time and here we have the latest idiotic addition
by
Anonymous02/07/08
Why do all the writers expect men to fight?
The idea that a marriage is determined by who can beat up who is ludicrous. What are you, cavemen? Hubby can call his lawyer and have mr. toughguy sued seven ways come sunday and his wife will be living on the street. That would be funny as hell to read.
by
Anonymous02/07/08
Tell me is this a tragedy of three losers?
the husband had no control of the actions from the beginning. It would appear the wife and the lover had been involved before this action takes place. It would appear she had already decided to get rid of the husband. As this develops the only real need for the older husband is his pay check. To make the story most effective he has to be gone when they get out of bed, gone and never return. Let the wife attempt to get the immature one to provide lifestyle and expenses. It wont happen. So long been good to know you. So long will get along better without you.
by
Anonymous02/07/08
i think in real life if the husband or friend
took a gun and shoot the balls off the mr.big shot some of the boldness of assholes like him would go away.the nerve of a man to tell another about sex with his wife,that's crazy.some friend of the hubby could take matters in his hands and fuck up the mr.big shoot for ever.
by
Anonymous02/07/08
Migraines
...are more fun than reading this story.
by
Anonymous02/07/08
Things happen in the heat of sex, some not some---
thing to be proud of.---To write this letter would be an act that makes you one of the major shit heads of all time.
by
Anonymous02/07/08
To be pissed on
This story belongs in the bottom of an urinal as it is only good to be pissed on
I know I don't even like these type of stories but I was curious about your writing so thought I know i'll read his newest story and although i did not like the content I have heard from various people that this type of thing happens not just in the UK but all around the world why someone would want to do this is beyond me but whatever floats your boat. but like most men on this site(most being a general term) If my wife did this to me the police would be digging two graves and i really would not care how long they locked me up for!. Any way writing was ok but sorry because I do not agree with cuckolding It has to be a ZERO.
Another wimp/cuckold author who thinks they can write erotica. All they can do is use their sick personalities to write this type of garbage.
by
Anonymous02/07/08
Hey mister cuckolderer..I guess that's a word too
To be honest you can have the slut whore. I watched as you fucked her with your pathetic little three inch pecker. She has bad gas at night and farts loudly and smelly too. Her mother and all the women in her family turn to fat when they reach a certain age.and their legs get huge. Imagine a baloon only blown up at the bottom. Their tits sag to below the knees I was going to dump the slut anyway. Besides the whore fucked a bunch of nigger hoboes last month and I haven't had sex with her since then. She has AIDS and now ...so do you. That's why she was so hard up to fuck you. Anyway now that the slut and you are both going to die I have taken out a policy on both of you and when you die a painful..oh yes the AIDS she has is a dreadful fast acting one. So welcome to the scuzzy whore my cuckolderer...have fun while you live...I know I will once you are dead in six months...Hhahahahahahahhhahahahahahah.marriedwithb alls@yahoo.com
by
Anonymous02/07/08
part 2 revenge/ by the husband
will you the writer write a story of the husband taking out the other man and reclaim his wife? will the wife understand that the coupling got out of hand and her marriage is worth more than sex with someone else.jrj
It's interesting how a twisted mind can write such a degrading story. Please don't write again.
by
Anonymous02/08/08
Excellent
You can tell it was good by how much it riled up the typical closed-minded critics!
by
Anonymous02/08/08
Writing own comments is sad but understandable
Do you know what an anomaly is writer?
Its when your comment is diametrically opposed to the others.
Fit somewhere else jimbo. People into self disrespect are among the lowest on the scum poll.
by
Anonymous02/08/08
The Point.
The point of this little story to me is don't offer what you don't want to lose. There are times in a marriage for strength, for saying hell no, for saying you ever do that again I will kick your ass,ect. This goes for both parties. We each test the other and boundries. This husband had many chances to say stop,get the fuck out and don't come back and all the rest,he failed. In the story he is still failing.We all want to feel wanted,needed,treasured.When your husband allowes this to happen how can you feel anything but disguest for him. There are lots of kinds of strength, this husband had none. Still just a fantsey.
It is interesting and not without amusement to note that at the time of writing the most famous \'cuckold\' of our age, Mrs Clinton, is likely to become President of the USA.
by
Anonymous02/09/08
Not just bad
This is not just badly written but it is also far from erotic - a waste on time really
by
Anonymous02/10/08
sorry for my previous comment
I am anonymous from the USA and love little ones hehehe. I tried to read the story but it used large words and got lost. But I got all of my comments wrong. About as sexy as a road accident
by
Anonymous02/10/08
just crap
this is just crap, nothing else can be said about it
by
Anonymous02/10/08
Excellent story
Excellent story. Very well written. I enjoyed the different point of view. Ignore the haters. They are not mature enough to not read the forums they don't like. Keep up the good work!
by
Anonymous02/11/08
bad
bad writing, bad plot, vote 0 and skip
by
Anonymous02/11/08
what was erotic about this?
If this is your idea of erotica I can see why you dropped out of school
by
Anonymous02/11/08
Neither Nor
Neither erotic nor well written
by
Anonymous02/12/08
You need some learning
Not good taking a worn out storyline and trying to pass it off as new, learn how to write your own story and then try again
by
Anonymous02/13/08
another reject
another reject from all the other erotic story sites
by
Anonymous02/14/08
not just badly written
not just badly written but the biggest sin of all - boring!!!
by
Anonymous05/25/09
reply
to whom it may concern: she is yours, i give her to you as mauch as i can in such a situation. she will be living elsewhere and you may or may not support her, as you will. i no longer care, what she does, or you do. sincerely
by
Anonymous03/21/10
is this one with followup?
There was one, where the smug arrogant twit and the silly wife each found the price for such a daliance. She was out of the house (note I don't say home) and finds the stud is more a thud. Her life has changed, where even the surroundings are less. He was gotten back in a most effective way, and not quite so smug anymore. payback is a bitch, where everything has its price.
These people do not understand a cuckold lifestyle. I would love to have another man give my wife this kind of sexual pleasure. I love her enough to accept my size may not give her the sexual pleasure another man could. Keep wrighting Great Story!!!!!!
It said he watched so I skipped to he end and rated it 1*. I may like reading about stories where the wife cheats. However, if the husband watches or approves, I stop reading and rate the story 1*.
by
Anonymous06/07/13
Well you can have her
She's a cheating slut. You want her? Excellent! Just have her sign these divorce papers giving me 90% of the marital assets and she can move in with you. And know this - she's cheated once, she'll cheat again - on you. Enjoy your time together. I imagine it will be short. One more thing - the next time you write a letter to a cuckolded husband - get a ghost writer because this letter was just plain bad.
Keep her and all the maintenance that comes with her. What a prick.
by
Anonymous03/02/15
Reply to your letter
Thanks for the note James. You are welcome to her. When you done with her pass her on to someone else. Oh and I am sorry about the Genital warts and the herpes, my bad (hehehe).
Thank God! She talks continuously, can't cook and doesn't know what housework is. She can't earn a salary, because she has no skills, and her pussy is always dry. I know it was wet tonight, but only because she squeezed a bottle of KY up ther before you came. She has a gambling problem and her hygiene leaves a lot to be desired. Yeah, I admit, I washed her up real well before you arrived so you wouldn't notice, but now that you have claimed her I can stop that. By the way, her morning breath is hideous, she will stop blow jobs as soon as your honeymoon period is over. Yeah I know you think you're going to be different, but she confessed to me a month after our wedding she would never continue that habit because it is disgusting. It's just her "hook." Oh and don't count on her getting anything from the divorce. I made her sign a prenup years ago, and if she leaves me for another guy (which she just did by sending me out of the room so you could fuck some more) she leaves with nothing. I hope you have savings, she's going to need shoes. A lot of them. Oh, and by the way, it's a two for me deal. Her mom will be living with you two during the summers.
So thanks for taking her off my hands. I'll be moving in with my secretary. Yeah, she's kind of hot, so don't feel you have to share Margaret later, I've really had my fill of her and think a new flavor will be exciting. You two can have the house, but you should realize we took out a second mortgage to pay the kids college costs, so you'll want to,rebuild some equity before you sell. I wish you both, and hope you have a nice life!
Yours truly,
John
by
Anonymous02/27/17
Heh. Dear Sap,
Thank you! Thank you for the extremely favorable divorce you got me from that entitled selfish princess! I couldn't figure out a way out of this and you came along. Yep, she's all yours now! Congratulations!.
English
W.T.F.
Not bad,could have been longer with more build up but still erotic. Thanks!
Good thing for him that HE will never get old
If I was the husband, I would have left the room ...to pack. If he didn't, there could be no conquest for the stud in taking her from such a wimp.
Nobody wins.The stud gets an aging floozy with no shame or loyalty. The bitch gets an arrogant, immature, simple-minded lothario. The husband, hopefully, gets out with a fresh start.
Another UK Self Cuckold Lullaby
Your bio indicates interest in all things living but who would give you any serious time after seeing your proclivity here for male humiliation - hardly interesting - just sick.
You stirred emotion - but it was anger for your contortion and disrespect for a man you created.
Collection ?
Was'nt this website supposed to be a collection of erotica?
Instead it is a collection of some of the worst stories around, this being one prime example
You Say
You say you are a blond british guy,do you mean Gay?
from a cuck's perspective
The sour comments are not from cuck's- these grumps just dont get the lifestyle. I enjoyed the story.
Ah! Literotica!
Where else would one find a choice collection of the worst writers of our time and here we have the latest idiotic addition
Why do all the writers expect men to fight?
The idea that a marriage is determined by who can beat up who is ludicrous. What are you, cavemen? Hubby can call his lawyer and have mr. toughguy sued seven ways come sunday and his wife will be living on the street. That would be funny as hell to read.
Tell me is this a tragedy of three losers?
the husband had no control of the actions from the beginning. It would appear the wife and the lover had been involved before this action takes place. It would appear she had already decided to get rid of the husband. As this develops the only real need for the older husband is his pay check. To make the story most effective he has to be gone when they get out of bed, gone and never return. Let the wife attempt to get the immature one to provide lifestyle and expenses. It wont happen. So long been good to know you. So long will get along better without you.
i think in real life if the husband or friend
took a gun and shoot the balls off the mr.big shot some of the boldness of assholes like him would go away.the nerve of a man to tell another about sex with his wife,that's crazy.some friend of the hubby could take matters in his hands and fuck up the mr.big shoot for ever.
Migraines
...are more fun than reading this story.
Things happen in the heat of sex, some not some---
thing to be proud of.---To write this letter would be an act that makes you one of the major shit heads of all time.
To be pissed on
This story belongs in the bottom of an urinal as it is only good to be pissed on
I know!
I know I don't even like these type of stories but I was curious about your writing so thought I know i'll read his newest story and although i did not like the content I have heard from various people that this type of thing happens not just in the UK but all around the world why someone would want to do this is beyond me but whatever floats your boat. but like most men on this site(most being a general term) If my wife did this to me the police would be digging two graves and i really would not care how long they locked me up for!. Any way writing was ok but sorry because I do not agree with cuckolding It has to be a ZERO.
Cuckold
Another wimp/cuckold author who thinks they can write erotica. All they can do is use their sick personalities to write this type of garbage.
Hey mister cuckolderer..I guess that's a word too
To be honest you can have the slut whore. I watched as you fucked her with your pathetic little three inch pecker. She has bad gas at night and farts loudly and smelly too. Her mother and all the women in her family turn to fat when they reach a certain age.and their legs get huge. Imagine a baloon only blown up at the bottom. Their tits sag to below the knees I was going to dump the slut anyway. Besides the whore fucked a bunch of nigger hoboes last month and I haven't had sex with her since then. She has AIDS and now ...so do you. That's why she was so hard up to fuck you. Anyway now that the slut and you are both going to die I have taken out a policy on both of you and when you die a painful..oh yes the AIDS she has is a dreadful fast acting one. So welcome to the scuzzy whore my cuckolderer...have fun while you live...I know I will once you are dead in six months...Hhahahahahahahhhahahahahahah.marriedwithb alls@yahoo.com
part 2 revenge/ by the husband
will you the writer write a story of the husband taking out the other man and reclaim his wife? will the wife understand that the coupling got out of hand and her marriage is worth more than sex with someone else.jrj
More
husband needs revenge.
More
husband needs revenge.
degrading
It's interesting how a twisted mind can write such a degrading story. Please don't write again.
Excellent
You can tell it was good by how much it riled up the typical closed-minded critics!
Writing own comments is sad but understandable
Do you know what an anomaly is writer?
Its when your comment is diametrically opposed to the others.
Fit somewhere else jimbo. People into self disrespect are among the lowest on the scum poll.
The Point.
The point of this little story to me is don't offer what you don't want to lose. There are times in a marriage for strength, for saying hell no, for saying you ever do that again I will kick your ass,ect. This goes for both parties. We each test the other and boundries. This husband had many chances to say stop,get the fuck out and don't come back and all the rest,he failed. In the story he is still failing.We all want to feel wanted,needed,treasured.When your husband allowes this to happen how can you feel anything but disguest for him. There are lots of kinds of strength, this husband had none. Still just a fantsey.
this was excellent
im shocked by the hate in the responses though, keep writing
Very usefull
Very usefull this story is printed out on some soft paper, torn into strips and then hung on a nail behind the outhouse door.
Instructions
1 Print on some fairly stiff paper.
2 Roll into a cylinder and tape it to stay rolled up.
3 Put into the bottom of the urinal.
4 Now piss on it.
That is about all its good for - to prevent piss from splattering on your shoes.
best idea of what to do with this story
The previous poster had the right idea of what to do with this story although I am not sure I would even want to piss on it
This was excellent.
Dominant, arrogant young punk sexually controlling and older couple. Hope for more.
Cuckold for President?
It is interesting and not without amusement to note that at the time of writing the most famous \'cuckold\' of our age, Mrs Clinton, is likely to become President of the USA.
Not just bad
This is not just badly written but it is also far from erotic - a waste on time really
sorry for my previous comment
I am anonymous from the USA and love little ones hehehe. I tried to read the story but it used large words and got lost. But I got all of my comments wrong. About as sexy as a road accident
just crap
this is just crap, nothing else can be said about it
Excellent story
Excellent story. Very well written. I enjoyed the different point of view. Ignore the haters. They are not mature enough to not read the forums they don't like. Keep up the good work!
bad
bad writing, bad plot, vote 0 and skip
what was erotic about this?
If this is your idea of erotica I can see why you dropped out of school
Neither Nor
Neither erotic nor well written
You need some learning
Not good taking a worn out storyline and trying to pass it off as new, learn how to write your own story and then try again
another reject
another reject from all the other erotic story sites
not just badly written
not just badly written but the biggest sin of all - boring!!!
reply
to whom it may concern: she is yours, i give her to you as mauch as i can in such a situation. she will be living elsewhere and you may or may not support her, as you will. i no longer care, what she does, or you do. sincerely
is this one with followup?
There was one, where the smug arrogant twit and the silly wife each found the price for such a daliance. She was out of the house (note I don't say home) and finds the stud is more a thud. Her life has changed, where even the surroundings are less. He was gotten back in a most effective way, and not quite so smug anymore. payback is a bitch, where everything has its price.
Great Story
These people do not understand a cuckold lifestyle. I would love to have another man give my wife this kind of sexual pleasure. I love her enough to accept my size may not give her the sexual pleasure another man could. Keep wrighting Great Story!!!!!!
I only read the first pargraph
It said he watched so I skipped to he end and rated it 1*. I may like reading about stories where the wife cheats. However, if the husband watches or approves, I stop reading and rate the story 1*.
Well you can have her
She's a cheating slut. You want her? Excellent! Just have her sign these divorce papers giving me 90% of the marital assets and she can move in with you. And know this - she's cheated once, she'll cheat again - on you. Enjoy your time together. I imagine it will be short. One more thing - the next time you write a letter to a cuckolded husband - get a ghost writer because this letter was just plain bad.
Good
Keep her and all the maintenance that comes with her. What a prick.
Reply to your letter
Thanks for the note James. You are welcome to her. When you done with her pass her on to someone else. Oh and I am sorry about the Genital warts and the herpes, my bad (hehehe).
Real sick shit
to want to humiliate another like that. psychopath
you cuck fans are real sick fuckers
A letter back to the bull
Dear James,
Thank God! She talks continuously, can't cook and doesn't know what housework is. She can't earn a salary, because she has no skills, and her pussy is always dry. I know it was wet tonight, but only because she squeezed a bottle of KY up ther before you came. She has a gambling problem and her hygiene leaves a lot to be desired. Yeah, I admit, I washed her up real well before you arrived so you wouldn't notice, but now that you have claimed her I can stop that. By the way, her morning breath is hideous, she will stop blow jobs as soon as your honeymoon period is over. Yeah I know you think you're going to be different, but she confessed to me a month after our wedding she would never continue that habit because it is disgusting. It's just her "hook." Oh and don't count on her getting anything from the divorce. I made her sign a prenup years ago, and if she leaves me for another guy (which she just did by sending me out of the room so you could fuck some more) she leaves with nothing. I hope you have savings, she's going to need shoes. A lot of them. Oh, and by the way, it's a two for me deal. Her mom will be living with you two during the summers.
So thanks for taking her off my hands. I'll be moving in with my secretary. Yeah, she's kind of hot, so don't feel you have to share Margaret later, I've really had my fill of her and think a new flavor will be exciting. You two can have the house, but you should realize we took out a second mortgage to pay the kids college costs, so you'll want to,rebuild some equity before you sell. I wish you both, and hope you have a nice life!
Yours truly,
John
Heh. Dear Sap,
Thank you! Thank you for the extremely favorable divorce you got me from that entitled selfish princess! I couldn't figure out a way out of this and you came along. Yep, she's all yours now! Congratulations!.
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Letter to the Cuckold Ch. 01 or
More submissions by FitJim.