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Chocolate Sundae

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by Anonymous02/02/08

friends are for love and this is the perfect love

This a great story told in a low key manner and is quite believable.This what hapenned to my mother and her second huband. It turned into a real love story,

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by Anonymous02/02/08

thank u

It was so believable and well i hate to admit it but i wanted to make a sunday with wilf. mmmm..

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by Anonymous02/02/08

yes very believable

very good keep up the writing.. I enjoyed it very much..

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by Anonymous02/06/08

Oh where is Wilf...

Its really snowing outside right now. I need a neighbor like Wilf! Enjoyed the story. Is there a sequel in the works?

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by 02/07/08

A sweet telling

of love and longing. I could feel her need and her naughtiness.

Good luck in the contest!

Maharat

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