All Comments on 'Carpe Demi'

Love this story, made me super hot.....

While I'm glad he actually found his conscience in the midst of taking his ex-nanny, I was kind of hoping he'd remain a bastard and promise to use her again. Then again, that might have stretched realm of plausibility for the story. All in all a raunchy good time, thanks!

An'very, very HOT!!

Very hot! and realistic to boot. Too many writers in this genre of erotica forget the power that taking advantage of such situations gives up to the victim, making it too easy to break suspension of disbelief. Well done.

Brilliant lines:

"encouraged by her response he let his balls ditch their salty cargo" and "her lips and tongue moulded into union with his" and "enormous ramrod of desire" and "pale triangles of bikini guarded flesh"

Great job! It's a man's fantasy but written for a woman to enjoy I think.

Hot! Thank you!

You left the ending open for a sequel. And there definitely should be one between these two.

Another really hot one!

xoxo, Penny

LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT!!!

I'd have given this six stars - so wonderful!

Damn, you're an excellent writer

yeah man, give it to the slut, she deserved it!

I agree with mia_erotica, your descriptions are so intense and your lines, oh now I have to read more of your stories.

I love the deep description of everything. You milk the climax for all its worth. Well done.

Very believable!

not one of your best

the guy is not as abusive ,violent ,brutal ,rough,cold hearted asshole jerk like in your other non con fantasies

damn the main guy in what men wants and no mercy can give shivers to any one with the darkness in his mind

like that the girl character has got quite a backbone to blackmail him and turn the tables on him

unlike stupid submissive girls in your usual non con

chicks with a lil attitude gets me so excited enough to start a hot rough n8 for both of us