All Comments on 'Pics with Sister'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Not a bad plot but the writing leaves much to

be desired--It is simply a guys masturbation fantasy

snakebytesnakebyteabout 16 years ago
Can't wait

Hope there is more story to this, it was really good. I hope they actually do more then just look.

oldwayneoldwayneabout 16 years ago
Not bad so far.

Good start to what sounds like a hot little story. A little editing wouldn't hurt.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
good start

You are a good writer but need an editor - an example is "since he did not want to waist them" - waist in this context is spelled waste.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Can't Wait

I am SOOOO looking forward to a part two to this story, looks like it WILL be a good one. Being that I am REALLY into photographing, and had the pleasure of taking some pics of my sister. I ANXIOUSLY wait to see where the sister takes them tomorrow and the weekend.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Follow-up story??

Where is the next episode?

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
What happened to the sex??????^*!^*!^*!

THAT'S ALL.............

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