All Comments on 'I Won't Look'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
W.T.F.

Fun story,thanks, could be another part or more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great cliff-hangers work really well...

...in other genres, like action or suspense. Unfortunately, in erotica they are just a way of torturing your readers, unless you post all the chapters together. So PLEASE hurry with the next ten or twelve chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
HOW much come? Too unrealistic, sorry.

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chunkschunksalmost 16 years agoAuthor
Oh Yee of Little Semen

What, are you saying that everybody doesn't cum that much every time?

LOL, it's a C O M E D Y...

madengineer3madengineer3about 15 years ago
OOPS! The best laid plans......

This is a wonderful story about getting caught! It is well written and opens up for the possibility of much more action. I hope the story continues.

greylensman02greylensman02over 13 years ago
enjoyed it!

This is really well written and I found it close enough to believable to be very erotic. Great subject. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Cute

Don't usually go for the exhibitionist stories but this one is fun.

ManofMithgarManofMithgaralmost 8 years ago
Oops

Mommy got busted! Good story, I would have loved to hear how her daughter and friend reacted but since they were underage I understand.

fulballzfulballzover 7 years ago
A fun one

A mostly amusing story. A nice break from the usual fair and with just the right amount of twist in it to make for a fun, albeit short, read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Tease

That was naughty and there is no sequel, that's why you only received a 3.

REgards

curiousboy40curiousboy40over 7 years ago
don't leave us hanging Chunks

no pun intended haha but don't leave us hanging Chunks!

This needs more than just 1 page.

it was just about to get good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Perfect short story

No, no, it doesn't need more.......but if there is more, well the daughter needs to be 18 as well, right?

Frankly, I have a real short one like that I did for Erotic Fantascenes here on Lit about a woman watching the young man mowing his back yard and then washing off. Sometimes a quick short little scene like this is perfect!

HappyPrickHappyPrickalmost 6 years ago
Thts

That's IT

MORE

THERE HAST TO BE MORE!!!!

olsaltyolsaltyover 5 years ago
Perfect Stroker!

As good as they get, from a woman's point of view....

the sauce on this cupcake is getting caught naked, with camera, open window, by TWO girls. Sets the stage for a great Chapter 2...or 2 and 3 !

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
LOVE (❤) it: ☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0=100%)!

👍👍

;)

NLDomNLDomover 3 years ago
Ooops!

Rolling On Floor Laughing My Ass Off~!!!!

Auspat2121Auspat2121over 2 years ago

Brilliant story very well written thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I think this is a similar story that needs more chapters now.

NICHOLXNICHOLXover 1 year ago

Well written, cute story. Hoping for a sequel! Voted five.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

As in Beth's Mom, more chapters please.

G

Marklynda2Marklynda2about 1 year ago

Peeping Thomasina, oh my! Well that should make for an interesting conversation next time she talks to Bobby. Very enjoyable stroke story, good plot and execution. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memory?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

A fun read, but not hot.

Bill S.

tsgtcapttsgtcapt5 months ago

Ahhh, the illicit viewing affair... or is it? Thank you.

AkpervertAkpervert6 days ago

This was a fun little story. Very plausible.

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