by chunks
...in other genres, like action or suspense. Unfortunately, in erotica they are just a way of torturing your readers, unless you post all the chapters together. So PLEASE hurry with the next ten or twelve chapters!
What, are you saying that everybody doesn't cum that much every time?
LOL, it's a C O M E D Y...
This is a wonderful story about getting caught! It is well written and opens up for the possibility of much more action. I hope the story continues.
This is really well written and I found it close enough to believable to be very erotic. Great subject. Thanks for sharing.
Mommy got busted! Good story, I would have loved to hear how her daughter and friend reacted but since they were underage I understand.
A mostly amusing story. A nice break from the usual fair and with just the right amount of twist in it to make for a fun, albeit short, read.
That was naughty and there is no sequel, that's why you only received a 3.
REgards
no pun intended haha but don't leave us hanging Chunks!
This needs more than just 1 page.
it was just about to get good!
No, no, it doesn't need more.......but if there is more, well the daughter needs to be 18 as well, right?
Frankly, I have a real short one like that I did for Erotic Fantascenes here on Lit about a woman watching the young man mowing his back yard and then washing off. Sometimes a quick short little scene like this is perfect!
As good as they get, from a woman's point of view....
the sauce on this cupcake is getting caught naked, with camera, open window, by TWO girls. Sets the stage for a great Chapter 2...or 2 and 3 !
Peeping Thomasina, oh my! Well that should make for an interesting conversation next time she talks to Bobby. Very enjoyable stroke story, good plot and execution. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memory?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.