All Comments on 'Summoning'

by AuthorNobilis

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very Harry Potter feeling

This felt like an adult Harry Potter story. I hope you've got more in mind like this 1.

SafraSafraabout 16 years ago
Goose-bumpy...

Mmmm, good story!

Nice twists... I liked your voice, especially the succubus part... When it was revealed that it was the guardian spirit, she could have mentioned that he gave her a nice climax.... Something along the line that this part of her service is somehow rewarding.... She could be a little naughty at least...

darklightfantasy27darklightfantasy27almost 12 years ago

well that's 1 way to be dedicated to your studies

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