All Comments on 'Beautiful Creatures'

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AMY_MonacoAMY_Monacoabout 16 years ago
Great

I liked the story a lot. Do you plan to continue with this storyline? Because it would be awesome if you did!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Awesome

Keep this story going please. It was great.Can't wait for the next.SR

mBrowmBrowabout 16 years ago
Creative erotic fantasy

Great story, and I hope you extend it in future chapters.

An editor would be helpful for some erratic terms and creative punctuation.

Vampgirl40Vampgirl40over 13 years ago

Great Story, Loved it!

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