All Comments on 'Define a Line'

I love when it when I see a poet do this: write erotica that really works with no graphic language (and you barely even mention anything human!). Great job! Your poem has been reviewed and recommended in the New Poems Reviews thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thank you for the read! :-)

EROTIC!!! This is really good, engaging the reader to use his mind to create a highly charged picture. It doesn't use crude and obvious simple vulgarities; it's subtle in its brush strokes and what's happening here is really HOT!

I don't have much more to add than previous commenters have said other then saying I appreciate your poetry. This poem is a great example of your work and erotic poetry without being porny. Very sexy, thanks.

you took me in with 'warm breath

and an oblique whimper,'.. and I

finished with whispy warm breath,

scroll up, and read again.. this

was truly a *fantastic* piece of sensual

erotic writing, to my core.. and more.

sGp