All Comments on 'An Accident Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
yeah, but.......

You really must get a handle on those homonym errors. (Okay, the one with "bear skin" was actually hilarious. I had this vision of her having grabbed the animal rug from in front of the fireplace and stuffing it under her pajama top. LOL) But after that, please! "peal" and "need"??!!! Go buy a dictionary. Otherwise these first two chapters have made for an entertaining story.

-- KK in Texas

don87654don87654about 16 years ago
No accident at last!

So will this story continue with you being knocked up by your Daddy?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Some accident! !!!

The only accident here is the way that you keep on leading us on

You have a great storyline started but I can't figure out if she's a lesbian or a daddy's girl.

Give me a break and make up your mind

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