by ILoveYourPantsToo
You really must get a handle on those homonym errors. (Okay, the one with "bear skin" was actually hilarious. I had this vision of her having grabbed the animal rug from in front of the fireplace and stuffing it under her pajama top. LOL) But after that, please! "peal" and "need"??!!! Go buy a dictionary. Otherwise these first two chapters have made for an entertaining story.
-- KK in Texas
So will this story continue with you being knocked up by your Daddy?
The only accident here is the way that you keep on leading us on
You have a great storyline started but I can't figure out if she's a lesbian or a daddy's girl.
Give me a break and make up your mind