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Looking forward...
....to what I hope is a nice, long series. I like the way you've started off
Give me more
Can hardly wait for the next installment.
Great Start
Looks like a very intersting adventure for a start up photographer.
One comment, though, when taking pictures of the bridesmaids the spelling of the shoes should be high heels.
A minor distration to a well written story foundation.
To Great Start
If you are going to criticize spelling, check your own spelling first! Intersting & distration?
Don't stop believing
A young man and his dreams give rise to the song title,
"Don't stop believing" The story line is inspirational!
Young Greg has the ablility to help change lives and have a great deal of fun in the process. I can forsee a long, long series of stories with Greg and his escapades in the furture. Thanks for an enjoyable start.
Great
I find it hard to notice spelling mistakes when i read a good story. Please keep up the great work and please continue.
r e v e n g e: ice cold
damn, that was movie of the week material. i can't wait to read the rest.
MORE!!
gotta have the second installment soon!!
great story.
5 stars. just one thing, don't take it personal. it's high heels, not heals
Great reading
great story i hope that is not all there is to it ..it has the makings of a long story....so get writting and give us the next instalment....Aussie Ken
learn to spell, idiot !
'Heels', cockhead, not 'heals' !!
You lose so many readers with your shit spelling. You're obviously a foot man, but - come on, - are you familiar with the term 'proof read' ?
Give us a break, please !!
mmmmm
I can't wait to hear more about this!!
Interesting Start
Very good beginning. I can see many possibilities for this story line. I'm looking forward to more chapters.
Very Hot start, cant' wait for more
The lack of actual sex in a first chapter usually has me searching for other stories, but this one leaves me excited for the next chapters, well done! My only complaint is the explaination of the "Mrs. Robinson line". If someone is too young to know the reference, so be it, don't break the tone of the story trying to explain it.
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