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Brenda's Fate

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/13/08

Interesting

Interesting fetish this man has....can honestly say I havent heard of it before...keep it up!

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by Anonymous02/13/08

You are getting closer to it.

Do you know about the saddles for the girls back to carry her passenger and the shoes that lace high with the hooves?
Do you know the ponygirl walk the high step until thigh is parallel to the ground, that ponygirl prance? This woman was a whore, she was selling herself for money and her greed got her a good life. She never has to worry about bills, spending money, or clothes again. They are all taken care of for her, as well as her vet expenses. Yes a good life awaits her once she is trained.

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by Anonymous12/22/08

Rubbish

Literature ? No. This would only appeal to the lowest.
Obviously, treating a woman this way appeals to you.
I hope that by now you are comfortable in your little padded room with frequent visits from a good psychiatrist

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by Boxlicker10101/12/09

This Is Fiction

Treating a woman or any other person like this would not appeal to me or to any other decent person. It is strictly a story, fiction made up by me. I have written other stories lke this one about ponygirls who are slaves and I have also written about Tammy and Strider, two young women who enjoy being ponygirls. The second kind of story is a lot more fun to write.


As for what a slave ponygirl does, or the pace she uses, that depends on her master's commands if she wants to avoid punishment. She may be ordered to use the ponygirl strut and pull a carriage or she may be ordered to carry a passenger while on her hands and knees, such as is happening to Brenda. If I continue with this story, I may describe further trsining in pulling a conveyance of some kind, either alone or in tandem with another ponygirl. I haven't decided yet.

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by Anonymous05/16/11

Lanoire

I love this story. Very dark and quite sadistic - definitely continue! Female reader by the way, though not sure if that makes any difference. *Chuckle*

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by Anonymous06/27/11

Yay, a ponygirl riding story!!

I loved it. Please more? More riding, particularly?

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