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luv it
I love this story. I cant wait to see what happens next.
Lovin' It!
I truly love this story! However, there is one small inconsistancy you might want to fix....when Wes was telling of going back in time, you originally stated it was 1980, then when Cynara was questioning him, she asked if he returned to 1970. As I said, just a small inconsistancy and anyone reading the story would know what you meant. :)
All in all, a wonderful tale so far. I do hope Cynara is able to save Charles!
great stuff!!!!!
If I only get one request, it's this: Please don't make us wait long for the resolution in the story. This is an absolutely outstanding piece.
-- KK in Texas
This is a beautiful story
and I like the pacing. You're doing really well.
Love it!
Loved it! such a great chapter! Cant wait for the next chapter! does Cynara go back in time again!? Cant wait to find out!! Thanks
Love it
I love your story. I love the humor, and the period and the time travel. Hope the next part is her soon.
EEK!!
I'm like on pins and needles right now! Can't wait to hear what happens after the fall*
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