by cellophanesmile
Really, I am liking these first two chapters quite a lot. But you need to get a handle on the homonym errors (buy a dictionary!). But that said, the story line is thoroughly entertaining. Keep up the good work.
-- KK in Texas
...love your work. It is very entertaining, and sweet, and such a lovely read! Keep going!!
...love your work. It is very entertaining, and sweet, and such a lovely read! Keep going!!
Please continue!!i want to know what happens!! Also when will you finish your other story? I lvoe your writting!!!