I "Can't stop this feeling", another song title to describe the way this story is growing. I can't wait for the next installment. NYC will never be the same after Greg and Annie get what they are going after.
Fine job so far except the occasional spelling errors etc.
I would suggest a proof reader for help. But an excellent story line and I am looking forward to many more chapters.
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Anonymous02/23/08
for goodness sake
spelling smelling who cares is the content good does it flow?yes
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Can't stop this feelng
I "Can't stop this feeling", another song title to describe the way this story is growing. I can't wait for the next installment. NYC will never be the same after Greg and Annie get what they are going after.
Excellent
Only one critisism: Too many incomplete sentences(words missing).
Better and better
Fine job so far except the occasional spelling errors etc.
I would suggest a proof reader for help. But an excellent story line and I am looking forward to many more chapters.
for goodness sake
spelling smelling who cares is the content good does it flow?yes
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