All Comments on 'Sarah Meets Brooke Ch. 03'

by alabamacowgirl69

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PoutineFanPoutineFanabout 16 years ago
Good, but some room for improvement

I just read all 3 parts, and I did think that they were very well-written. Having said that, the story did feel somewhat rushed... as if you were trying to get to the love scene as fast as possible. It's a good story, but don't ever be afraid to take your time getting your characters to the climax (no pun intended *lol*).

DolphinXXXDolphinXXXabout 16 years ago
Loved It!!!!

Hey Sarah... great work hun.. very well written... Cant wait to see what else ya got cookin in that creative mind..

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