by alabamacowgirl69
I just read all 3 parts, and I did think that they were very well-written. Having said that, the story did feel somewhat rushed... as if you were trying to get to the love scene as fast as possible. It's a good story, but don't ever be afraid to take your time getting your characters to the climax (no pun intended *lol*).
Hey Sarah... great work hun.. very well written... Cant wait to see what else ya got cookin in that creative mind..