All Comments on '02/08 --- Your Song'

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Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 16 years ago
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To paraphrase an old definition of mandala, Your Song is a song that contains more than it can hold. Very nice.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 16 years ago
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+ shows thought in the arrangement and the sound of the words.

- material could be stronger as could the stucture.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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So seductive, your song, with word patterns alluring and beckoning.

DawnJDawnJabout 16 years ago
Powerful!

"Be careful

love, tug at my heart more

and it will be my footsteps

gracing the threshold of your door."

What more is there to say?

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
UNKNOWN FEELINGS TO ANOTHER

should be shared. TK U MLJ LV NV

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