by wildsweetone
To paraphrase an old definition of mandala, Your Song is a song that contains more than it can hold. Very nice.
+ shows thought in the arrangement and the sound of the words.
- material could be stronger as could the stucture.
"Be careful
love, tug at my heart more
and it will be my footsteps
gracing the threshold of your door."
What more is there to say?